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Touching Angels Open in new Window. [E]
Stretching upwards, I strain toward the music's source. {Form: Synchronicity}
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Excellent work, Ken. Great vocabulary. Only slight exception in form is the fourth stanza, line #3. A single syllable, instead of two.

Listening, watching, running, striving to gain all of the pretty things in the environment, only to see that you were making a snow angel.

Works for me. WRITE ON!
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