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For the daughter I'll have Open in new Window. [E]
A pledge to my little girl.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Thank you for sharing your poem with me
First impression: A well written poem, structured
with a good explanation of the story within the poem.
The poem reads well and is easy to follow and understand.
I like your loyalty of you pledge to your little girl.
I found your item on the random review page.
The title captured my interest and held it.
Spelling errors I found none so therefor no need to
suggest changes. Overall Impression: A well written poem wnich shows your love for your little girl. I enjoyed reviewing this item .Keep writing, and I hope to read more of your writing. Until next time signing out.
Reviewed by Mary Ann MCPhedran..
















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