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 The Smugger Burglar Open in new Window. [E]
"a dark-dressed burglar, breaking and entering...couldn’t be smugger"
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is a well-prepared poem, Tim Chiu.

The form is consistently anapestic tetrameter with a-a-b-b rhyme scheme.

The story told is a very sad event with an excellent ending. "Crime does not pay." The consequences are more than anyone in their right mind would want to pay. Thank you for reminding us of this truth.

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