Hiding a review instantly removes
it from your view. Public reviews that have been hidden are not displayed on
the public review listing page.
Given: Aug 29, 2025 at 12:42pm
Length: 737 Characters |
732 w/o WritingML
Excellent message, Patricia A. Maniaci.
As to the form of this poem, it appears to be eight couplets, based solely on the rhyme scheme of a-a for every couplet. You've chosen to format this poem as a long uni-stanza, rather than eight separate couplets, which is, of course, poet's choice.
There are only two spelling changes, that I can offer, and these are easy enough to find, since they are in the first and last lines.
Line #1 - May I suggest, "An eagle flies around" rather than using the possessive form of the word, "fly."
Line #16 (last line) - May I suggest, "and they have intuition, too." This fits your meaning, since it is interchangeable with "also."
Excellent Work! Blessings Always! WRITE ON!
You responded to this review 08/29/2025 @ 8:13pm EDT
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4831912
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.06 seconds at 11:38am on Oct 29, 2025 via server WEBX1.