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God Created Eagles Open in new Window. [E]
daily 5/20/2025
by PATRICIA A. MANIACI Author Icon
Review by Jay O'Toole Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Excellent message, Patricia A. Maniaci.

As to the form of this poem, it appears to be eight couplets, based solely on the rhyme scheme of a-a for every couplet. You've chosen to format this poem as a long uni-stanza, rather than eight separate couplets, which is, of course, poet's choice.

There are only two spelling changes, that I can offer, and these are easy enough to find, since they are in the first and last lines.

Line #1 - May I suggest, "An eagle flies around" rather than using the possessive form of the word, "fly."

Line #16 (last line) - May I suggest, "and they have intuition, too." This fits your meaning, since it is interchangeable with "also."

Excellent Work! Blessings Always! WRITE ON!
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