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 Unconcerned  Open in new Window. [18+]
An eternal lesson. Do you know Jesus?
by Crissy~Baby! Author Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Sobering words, Crissy. Live for self, and lose everything. Receive the Lord's great Salvation, and be given all He has for us.

14 verses of 11 quatrains and three couplets. The lines seem to be tetrameter with a mixture of iambic and anapestic meter. The quatrains rhyme in the a-a-b-b rhyme scheme with the couplets rhyming a-a. If we group all the couplets for rhyming comparison, we find the scheme to be a-a-a-a-b-b.

Excellent poem, Crissy. This is a message of great concern. WRITE ON!
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