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New season Open in new Window. [E]
A poem about renewal and hope
by Sumojo Author Icon
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Review by Jay O'Toole Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This is a good poem, Sumojo. Thank you for the wonderful homage to spring.

Spring inspires love for all, especially us poets. Well said.

You have created quatrains without rhyme scheme, except for the last one, which is a-b-a-b. Since these are quatrains, the limit of the contest is five. I had to count multiple times, but you have six quatrains, which is 24 lines. I have taken off the half-point for that reason.

I am so glad that God shares "with us his grace and favor."

Blessings Always! WRITE ON!
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