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Given: Sep 11, 2025 at 1:38am
Length: 524 Characters |
519 w/o WritingML
This is a good poem, Sumojo. Thank you for the wonderful homage to spring.
Spring inspires love for all, especially us poets. Well said.
You have created quatrains without rhyme scheme, except for the last one, which is a-b-a-b. Since these are quatrains, the limit of the contest is five. I had to count multiple times, but you have six quatrains, which is 24 lines. I have taken off the half-point for that reason.
I am so glad that God shares "with us his grace and favor."
Blessings Always! WRITE ON!
You responded to this review 09/11/2025 @ 6:00am EDT
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