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 Take the Hint and Proceed Open in new Window. [E]
Sometimes, our best is yet to come - a workplace poem.
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
Review by Jay O'Toole Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Good poem, Tim. Excellent advice about workplace culture. Working as a team is definitely important. However, I must confess, I don't get the "outer space" reference. I guess I missed the connection.

The form is comprised of the rhythms of mostly iambic trimeter and iambic tetrameter. You consistently write very good poems in four quatrains, like this one.

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