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 The Pursuit Open in new Window. [13+]
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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A caper of epic proportions - or it would be, if it wasn't so funny. An officer has an odd dream, involving some rather crazy things, involving two famous leaders, and a dog. Next thing he knows, he looses a shoe, and then his car, and crazy things happen to the car. Will he get the car back? Who knows?

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Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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