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It's Getting Near Christmas. Open in new Window. [E]
Think of Him on His birthday as I sit in His shadow. I remember why He is Lord above
by Spiritual Dawning Author Icon
Review by Jay O'Toole Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Excellent, Spiritual Dawning. How wonderful for us to "keep Christmas in my heart all the year," in the words of the transformed Ebenezer Scrooge.

Six couplets with a-a rhyme, mostly, because the second one was a bit of a rhyming challenge for me.

It would be nice to visit some place with snow on Christmas Day. I don't recall that, since my childhood years, living out in the Oklahoma Panhandle.

What wondrous sights, sounds, and tastes Christmas offers from the "Holy Night" to the joyous Morn.

Great poem, Spiritual Dawning. WRITE ON!
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