Excellent, Huntersmoon. I like the rhyme scheme. The rhythm is good, too. Mostly tetrameter, though the last line is trimeter. Mostly iambic feet with some anapest thrown in for good measure. The form is followed nicely.

It is a challenging subject, but as I've heard preachers says for much of my life, so far, "Until you're ready to die, you're not ready to live."

You have the good perspective, according to this couple,
"Celebrate life; do not grieve
for our hope lies beyond death."
I'm so glad that is your testimony. (John 3:3; John 6:37,44; John 14:6; Romans 9:15-16; Philippians 2:13, KJV)

Well-written. WRITE ON!