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A memory of my gol den years
by Mary Ann MCPhedran Author Icon
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Review by Jay O'Toole Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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WOW, Mary Ann! This is so touching and personal. How wonderful to remember such sweet times with a dearly departed loved one.

You've chosen to use an interesting arrangement of verses: a couplet, a quatrain, a sixain, and an octave. The rhymes are often couplet rhymes, but not always. I'm seeing multiple feet on the various lines, including dimeter, trimeter, and tetrameter.

Great poem! WRITE ON!
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