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For Authors: October 27, 2021 Issue [#11013]




 This week: Can You See it?
  Edited by: NaNoNette Author IconMail Icon
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1. About this Newsletter
2. A Word from our Sponsor
3. Letter from the Editor
4. Editor's Picks
5. A Word from Writing.Com
6. Ask & Answer
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About This Newsletter

Rules such as "Write what you know," and "Show, don't tell," while doubtlessly grounded in good sense, can be ignored with impunity by any novelist nimble enough to get away with it. There is, in fact, only one rule in writing fiction: Whatever works, works.
--- Tom Robbins

Most people say, "Show, don't tell," but I stand by Show and Tell, because when writers put their work out into the world, they're like kids bringing their broken unicorns and chewed-up teddy bears into class in the sad hope that someone else will love them as much as they do.
--- Colson Whitehead


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Letter from the editor

Can You See it?


Just like all phrases that present themselves as universal truth, "Show don't tell" can't be the defining qualifier when it comes to written works. Yelling it louder and more often doesn't make it true.

If you took a second to read the two quotes above, you'll find that published authors have made it to be famous enough to be quoted without yelling "Show don't tell" at everyone around them.

Taking part in writing exercises and contests that aim to train a "show don't tell" attitude can help writers to become more rounded. Sometimes, it's good to focus on one technique for a while. Just like any other skill, writing exercises have their place in fiction writing. The outcome can be fun and is often an eye-opening writing session for the writer too.

At the same time, a book or short story does not need to be all show instead of tell. Stories need to be able to move in time and space without excruciating details. A writer should be able to simply narrate that the ship sailed from Boston to Amsterdam and let that be that. If the ship's passage holds no plot for the story, why would you fill it up with a show?

Show don't tell also recommends mixing up simple verbs with "strong" verbs. Now we're sitting there with a thesaurus and picking out the most murky meaning to a word just to avoid repetition. Really? And I mean: Really? How many times have your heard or read the advice that you should only use "said," "asked, "answered" as speech tags and avoid all the fancy ways to denote speech?

Why does the word police come after a writer who thrives on simple verbs and at the same time after a writer who embraces the flourish? Just how said and yelled both have their place, show and tell also each have their place.

Please enjoy the items below as they tell you how to show and also make fun of it. As you see, we can bake our cake and eat it too.

Is "show don't tell" and old hat or something that needs to be followed without question?


Editor's Picks

 Show Don't Tell Open in new Window. (ASR)
What does "Show don't tell" mean?
#1153543 by Vivian Author IconMail Icon

 
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Creating Motion in Fiction Open in new Window. (13+)
How to apply show don't tell principle and adjust the pace of the story
#1357824 by Joy Author IconMail Icon

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Potholes Open in new Window. (13+)
Roscoe makes a discovery: Life is full of potholes. A Show, Don't Tell Entry
#2188314 by 🌕 HuntersMoon Author IconMail Icon

 Red Light Green Light Open in new Window. (E)
show don't tell contest entry
#2210328 by Pumpkin Spice Sox Author IconMail Icon

 Danny Boy (Show Don't Tell) Open in new Window. (E)
My exercise in a very short story, practicing "show don't tell."
#1753369 by J. R. Author IconMail Icon

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What To Do To Not Get Read and Rated Open in new Window. (ASR)
You've heard it said what to do TO get read, now read what NOT to do.
#357186 by ElaineElaine Author IconMail Icon

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Create a memorable character using the given prompt for huge prizes!
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dogpack saving 4premium Author Icon wrote: I am looking forward to the celebration and many more years of being active on WDC. I recently found some information about show don't tell. The writer told about showing and telling almost ruined their writing. I tend to interweave dialogue and narrative as well as other aspects of a story so that the reader is given in appropriate places and doses the information that is needed to engage the reader and forward the story. What information do you have about this? "I MOVED A MOUNTAINOpen in new Window.

Good question. You just gave me my topic for today's newsletter. I hope you find it insightful.

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