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Cousinhood
I was poking around in my family genealogy and of course, fell down the rabbit hole of research when it came to determining which "kind" of cousin my cousins are. Sounds complicated? I felt that way at first. I found a reference on a family tree site. I'll quote here:
First cousins
Your first cousin (sometimes called a full cousin, but usually just a cousin) is the child of your aunt or uncle. The most recent ancestor you and your first cousin share is your grandparent. You typically share 12.5 percent of your first cousin’s DNA.
Second cousins
Your second cousins are the children of your parents’ first cousins. Take a look at your family tree, and you’ll see that you and your second cousins have the same great-grandparents. You typically share 3.125 percent of your second cousin’s DNA.
Third cousins
Of course, cousinhood doesn’t end there. You have likely also heard the term third cousin and wondered what that means. For third cousins, great-great-grandparents are the most recent common ancestor, and you share .781 percent of your DNA. You get the picture.
What is a second cousin once removed?
If you’re puzzled over the expression “second cousin once removed” or “twice removed,” you’re not alone. Luckily, the answer is simple: All cousins share a common ancestor. Your “degree of cousinhood” (second, third, fourth) depends on how many generations back that common ancestor is.
How to calculate cousin removes
“Removes” enter the picture when two relatives don’t have the same number of generations between them and their most recent common ancestor. One generation difference equals one remove.
Double cousins
You may have heard people say they’re double cousins. That’s a special cousin category for the offspring of brothers- and sisters-in-law—for example, your sister weds your husband’s brother. Instead of sharing one set of grandparents, as first cousins do, double cousins share both sets of grandparents. As you might expect, double cousins have more DNA in common than typical first cousins—about 25 percent.
“Kissing” cousins
Despite how it sounds, a kissing cousin isn’t a cousin you marry. Rather, it’s any distant relative you know well enough to kiss hello at family gatherings. Now we’re begging the question: How close a cousin is too close to wed? States have different laws governing consanguineous marriages (and we’ve heard all the jokes, so just stop right now). It’s best to ask a lawyer about statutes for the state in question.
Once statutes and attorneys are involved, it really gets interesting, doesn't it? And once again, becomes fodder for an interesting twist in your stories. Genealogy and history can play significant roles in your story arc. Then there's emotional family history between relatives...it gets convoluted, doesn't it?
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This month's question: Do you enjoy plot twists with family trees?
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Last month's "Action/Adventure Newsletter (June 8, 2022)" question: How do you show character emotions in your story?
Nobody’s Home : I hadn't been considering boredom as an emotion- I've been slack in my focus on the obvious (love, anger, excitement). In my WIP, the protagonist is a teenager. She could show her age *and* emotions like boredom and impatience by wandering slowly in circles looking at her surroundings, scuffing her feet, digging at stones in the dirt with the toe of her boot, repeatedly asking the same questions with increasing frequency or urgency (along the lines of "Are we there yet?") So much to choose from!
Excellent introduction to the topic by describing dealing with kids and boredom (I was always told to go outside and play, too. Seeing kids outside playing these days makes me absurdly happy.) Imagining a bored child gives me a multitude of descriptions to choose from, easily. Thanks for this!
Monty : Always something to do, I am seldom bored.
NaNoNette : I always prefer to read third person omniscient narration because it makes me feel the most connected to all of the characters' emotions. As a writer, I also prefer third person omniscient because it gives me the freedom to show what things are like to different characters. I probably use dialogue and movements the most to describe emotions without outright naming them.
Starling : With any luck, I can show emotion through something the character does or says. I'm trying to not use descriptive words where possible.
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Leslie Loo : By showing their actions, thoughts, and dialogue.
W.D.Wilcox : I show my character's emotion by the way the he looks. Like if he's in love, I show him as being naked. It says everything.
TheBusmanPoet : Emotions in my poems/writings comes through me.
N.A Miller : action thought and dialogue. But it must be written in a way to remain credible.
elephantsealer : How would I show "character emotions" in a story? How about: she stared at him, her eyes turned into slits and garish; her pinkish cheek turned deep red; her mouth bellowed contemptible vile, and in a sudden move she threw the desk telephone at him...
Thodin Thorsson : I try to empathize with my characters. Imagine what emotions he or she would be going through but it can be a little difficult. Especially with the piece of fan fiction I'm attempting, it's based around Clive Barker's A Hellbound Heart.
Mousewitch : Sometimes there is no other way than to just come out and say it. I usually let the circumstances the character is dealing with hint towards how they are feeling. After all, your readers already know how they would react in the same situation.....
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