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Poetry: November 02, 2005 Issue [#689]

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  Edited by: Becky Simpson
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1. About this Newsletter
2. A Word from our Sponsor
3. Letter from the Editor
4. Editor's Picks
5. A Word from Writing.Com
6. Ask & Answer
7. Removal instructions

About This Newsletter

         The middle of October featured one of the most romantic moons of the year, the Harvest Moon. It is a traditional time of bringing in the harvest and of uniting in love. So I have a special trip through the maze that is my mind for you. We shall take a look at a couple of different things at one time. First and foremost, we shall look at love poetry, some from well known poets. As we delve into love poetry, we shall do something different. We will look at several different sites for poetry. Then compare their offerings, to the offerings from the choicest Writing.Com poets to be found. As you try to find the end of the maze, I will provide you with this week’s list of favorite poets. On a personal note, October 30th is the anniversary of my father’s death so in his honor I would like to dedicate this newsletter in his memory. In closing I will answer the feedback from the last edition, listing the winners of the gift points. Becky Simpson


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Letter from the editor

         Now let’s talk love poetry. Hey, where did all the guys go? Come back, I promise I will do my best to avoid boring you to death. Actually, that wasn’t fair. Men write some amazing love poetry; many just don’t want anybody to know it; unless they are dead already-- just kidding. So, just as love and the pursuit of love occupies the minds of men and women a large part of the time, it is only natural that love poetry became an expression of that pursuit. I couldn’t prove it, and I don’t gamble, but I would be willing to bet that love poetry is the largest category for poetry in general. That being said, I began a look at the Internet and web sites available for love poetry. I must be a terrible researcher, because the first thing I learned was that each state has its own poetry society. If you have never visited your state’s site, I would encourage you to do so now.

         Okay, did you check your state’s poetry society site? Good. After I found a whole mess of state poetry societies I changed my search routine, and I came up with a boat load of love poetry sites. I had originally stated that I would pick poetry from other sites, but I am not sure if they would take kindly to that. You just learned that I am basically a very careful person, and when I am not sure of my standing, I sit down. Now instead of using their poetry here, I will merely provide you with some web addresses. Although after reading in them, I am still quite sure that here on Writing.Com, we have the best poets on the web.

         Here goes, we start our walk through the maze with some true classic poems. Personally, I love Emily Dickinson. Her poetry, I would like to think, is like mine. Somewhat mild in its language and stance. Yet it contains all the fire and passion that our subject deserves. Try this one. See if it isn’t mild and wild at the same time. I love this one.


Wild Nights
by Emily Dickinson

Wild nights. Wild nights!
Were I with thee,
Wild nights should be
Our luxury!

Futile the winds
To a heart in port
Done with the compass
Done with the chart.

Rowing in Eden.
Ah, the sea.
Might I but moor
Tonight with thee!


         Now here’s another favorite of mine that is often confused with Shakespeare’s Sonnet 18. It is truly a pleasure to read a master poet at work. Notice the rhyme scheme, but most of all notice the simple beauty of the verse. I wish I could write this well. I tell you now, though, there are poets on Writing.Com that can.


How Do I Love Thee?
by Elizabeth Barrett Browning

How do I love thee? Let me count the ways.
I love thee to the depth and breadth and height
My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight
For the ends of Being and ideal Grace.

I love thee to the level of everyday's
Most quiet need, by sun and candlelight.
I love thee freely, as men strive for Right;
I love thee purely, as they turn from Praise.

I love thee with the passion put to use
In my old griefs, and with my childhood's faith.
I love thee with a love I seemed to lose
With my lost saints,--I love thee with the breath,
Smiles, tears, of all my life!--and, if God choose,
I shall but love thee better after death.

         Our last classic offering is from Shelley. In his words I find truth, and I find a haunting desire that on occasion I myself have felt. A friend, no, that’s not true, someone very special to me suggested this one. As you read it, let the words flow through your heart, hear the truth in them, feel the celebration God designed for us all.


Love's Philosophy
~ Percy Bysshe Shelley

The fountains mingle with the river,
And the rivers with the ocean;
The winds of heaven mix forever
With a sweet emotion;
Nothing in the world is single;
All things by a law divine
In another's being mingle--
Why not I with thine?

See, the mountains kiss high heaven,
And the waves clasp one another;
No sister flower could be forgiven
If it disdained its brother;
And the sunlight clasps the earth,
And the moonbeams kiss the sea;--
What are all these kissings worth,
If thou kiss not me?

         No “thing” is meant to be alone whether it be beast or man. Read Genesis, see if it isn’t true. Our esteemed poet found a way to express this in words poetic. They fill your mind with images line by line, and those images mingle singles with their mates. Thank you, Mr. Shelley, for a beautiful glimpse of God’s plan for man and the gentle reminder of how love can haunt us when it is not fulfilled.

         There, you have my selection of classic poetry. Now it is time to take a look at our own poets on Writing.Com. We will have a look at how they feel about love and how they express it in poetry. Our first offering is rated number nine on the list of love poetry, yet it isn’t really a love poem. According to the poet, it is an anti-love poem. I think as you read it, you can see his point. Ask yourself as you read whether you would like to date this character. Or even marry him? Who is really the victim here?

"Victim of Love

Mongeaux



Victim of Love

With pity view the hapless swain
Once Aphrodite’s favor blessed
With promises now sought in vain
Of true love failed to manifest.

Sweet honeyed words his little goose
He labored mighty to ensnare
At dénouement she slipped the noose
And vanished into empty air.

For full three weeks he plied her ear
With sweet entreaties, coos and pleas.
But no reaction did he hear
Save hollow echoes on the breeze.

So churns him now his fevered mind
His last discourses with his prey
Hoping soon that he may find
Some misspoke words that made her stray.

Lush compliments he freely gave
Expensive presents, meals and toys
Of future prospects he would rave
Prosperity’s abundant joys.

Nevermore for her the drudge
Of labor’s tedious routine
Not a finger would she budge
To run her house or keep it clean.

All decisions he would make
No woe or care her life defile
Each blessed day she would awake
With nought to do but make him smile.

And just to keep up her morale
Eternal fealty he’d sworn
His full labors connubial
Once she with kids his home’d adorn.

A little Mary, Mike and Moe
Perhaps a James and Phillip too
Up to a dozen he’d bestow
Before her fertile days were through.

Such rosy vistas did he paint
Of future comforts, games and fun
He could not see a sole complaint
Or worry such that made her run.

Spurned despite his motives, flawless
One night while drinking deep the cup
In bottle depths he found his solace
And vowed the fair sex to give up.

Fickle faithless and unjust
Dames never know just what they want
A victim now of betrayed trust
He’d nevermore be so gallant.

To lofty peaks he'd next repair
Monastic life for him the cure
Amid the clouds and frosty air
he'd ne'r be bothered by Amour.

But as he swilled the final dregs
What strutting past did he espy?
A very shapely pair of legs
In skin-tight skirt above the thigh.

The clouds disperse, His spirit soars
He knows that love cannot be bought.
But money works just fine for whores
You do your best with what you've got!

Fin.


         Okay that takes care of the darker side of love. One of my favorite songs is “Tend My Garden”. Love is like a garden and like a garden it requires constant care to keep it healthy. In our next selection we will take a look at what happens when you forget to care for the one you love.

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I'VE LOST YOU
V. D. Hill

I’ve lost you,
Yet I can’t remember how
or even when.
In my distress,
Have I forgotten the beginning
or the end?
At last, a loving heart loved me.
At last, I'd found what others seek.
I could have lived my life in ecstasy,
Secluded in your arms,
But I was weak,
Too weak to love you in return.
For in my cleverness,
I failed to understand your sympathy,
And I became involved with my specific need.
Hence, without apparent sorrow,
The subtleness of grief,
You drifted on,
Without my ever realizing
You were gone.




         It has a sad effect no doubt about that. This was not a traditional piece of poetry, yet it was very heartfelt. Being full of emotion and poetic voice overcomes any difficulties I saw with the structure of the poem. Great Job The HighRoller ! Once again I want to move towards the warmer side of love. Our next poet does a great job of telling us what love is, I think he hits the nail on the head with his last line. Have a read and see if you don’t agree.

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Love is passion
Love is a fire
Love is romantic
Love is desire

Love is everything
Love is endless
Love is open
Love is relentless

Love is true
Love is emotion
Love is eternal
Love is an ocean

Love is deep
Love is wide
Love is contagious
Love is a ride

Love is hurtful
Love is cold
Love is devoted
Love is bold

Love is a gift
Love is a curse
Love is a fountain
Love is diverse

Love is unknown
Love is divine
Love is yours
Love is mine

Love is death
Love is grief
Love is amazing

Love is belief


         Thank you, Nick , I would suggest if you wish to click on the item number and take a look at it in its original form. This poet attempted to use color to add to the expression of his work. I normally think its distracting from the impact of the words so I have left the original colors out of this newsletter. We are down to the last of my highlighted items, though I could read love poetry all day and not get enough. I should note somewhere that love poetry takes many different forms; celebrating the gift of love, the pain of losing it, describing it, and so on. Our next poet captures love’s essence in her work "Moonlight of Echoes.



Moonlight of Echoes
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Vision of moonlight
Twirling chiffon
Translucent feelings
Dance until dawn

Echo of music
Haunting refrain
Transparent heartache
Cry in the rain

Whisper of longing
Candlelit glow
Cold winter's nightmare
Blanket of snow

Memory of spirit
Captured in flight
Volatile moment
Stormy cold night

Tears - lapse of judgment
Wounded proud love
Reach out for answers
From far above

Lack of compassion
Strengthened resolve
Unspoken feelings
Never involved

Slow passage of days
Days turn to years
Regret helps soften
Heart filled with tears

Hugs of forgiveness
Open warm smile
Find resolution
Talk for a while

Twinkle of starlight
Sharing a laugh
At long last finding
Love's other half

Echoes of moonlight
Roses romance
Too much time wasted
Once more we danced!


         Thank you, Carol, for your beauty of a poem and for capturing something so illusive for us. Excellent job. Now, before I close I was going to share some other sites with you that offer love poetry. This I do with very mixed feelings, because I would not suggest you post any of your works on any of these sites. The reason I say this is that I believe if you belong to Writing.Com, you have found the best site there is already. I will warn you some of these sites desire nothing but your money. Getting to be published is not easy and requires a lot of hard work. If someone offers you an easy route, you can almost be certain it is not real. Also the stated purpose of Writing.Com is to help us to become better. There are some real professionals on this site who are professors, editors, published poets, and publishers. All are dedicated to helping you be the best you can be.

         I am stepping down from my soap box…here’s the list.

http://library.lovingyou.com/poetry/

http://www.netpoets.com/

http://www.poemsandlove.com/

http://www.friendshipandlovepoetry.net/

http://www.lovepoetrycafe.com/

Okay enough of that. Please remember that I do not suggest you use or post to any of these sites. The only site I would ever suggest you use is this one.


         That wraps up another newsletter for me. I hope you found it interesting and that the poets have entertained you. If they did, then they are truly great poets. For those of you who have love, hold on to it with both hands. Don’t let go, no matter what! Losing love can be worse than dying. For those who do not have love in their life…welcome to the club. I hope you find it soon.

         Tip of the Day: Poetry takes heart, to write. Write from yours.


         Next month: How to write a poetry review. I am always at your service.

         Becky L Simpson


Editor's Picks

         The following members of Writing.Com are some of my favorite poets on Writing.Com. They exhibit and understanding and skill that, simply put, amaze me. I hope those I have forgotten will forgive me, but as time goes on and my memory prods, me this list will change.

Vivian
reblackwell
Stormy Lady
Theday
Tornado Day
wittyvixen
daycare



SUGGESTED READINGS:

         I call these poets and poems works of the week. Some will be by cases of all colors, as skill is not determined by your case color. Just five or six poems I think you might enjoy.

Thought Process (A woman on my mind)  (ASR)
I think we all have someone we wonder about.
#117233 by The Milkman


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#940126 by Not Available.


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#507878 by Not Available.


 Touched By Love  (E)
Dedicated to the love of my life, my light on every stormy day.
#891217 by Ann Ticipation


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#530696 by Not Available.







CONTESTS:

         The challenge for this edition is: Simply share with me a poem that is about love, send the link to me and remember there are 1,000 points for the first twenty readers to respond.

The winners from last month:

Lili Seawater
Lou-Here By His Grace


 
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Ask & Answer

Questions and comments from last week, my thanks to those who wrote in:

Submitted By:The Blue Dream
Submitted Comment:
Just wanted to say, thanks so much for featuring my poem "When the Dead Walk" in this week's poetry newsletter. I was so flattered! I'm actually from Michigan, but living in North Carolina now. I've just always been fascinated with the dark side. Thanks again!




You are most welcome, but I should tell you I used it because it was good. There now you know the truth. – hugs Becky


To the rest of you kind readers who made comments about October’s newsletter; thank you. If it were not for your kind words I would be inclined to find another way to spend the time I spend here.

If you have a question, comment or just an observation concerning this edition of the Poetry Newsletter please feel free to send it to me. I would also like our poetry newsletter readers to send me their favorite poem. Please include the poet’s name. I prefer poets from Writing.Com.


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