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"The possession of knowledge does not kill the sense
of wonder and mystery. There is always more mystery."
-- Anaïs Nin
Mystery Trivia of the Week: Before "retiring" to the life of a full-time writer, author Elizabeth Gunn had a variety of careers including an innkeeper in Montana, a travel writer detailing her adventures in North America and Europe, and spent several years as a live-aboard sailor. She also acquired a private pilot's license and took up both SCUBA and skydiving.
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THE UNFAMILIAR
One of the best things about the mystery genre is its ability to utilize and effective employ the unfamiliar in the telling of a story. It's always exciting when the reader eventually turns the unknown into something known, whether that's through a character's experiences or their own. While it can be argued that every genre utilizes some element of the unfamiliar (if you knew everything that was going to happen, what would the fun be in reading that story in the first place?), mystery is a wonderful genre because a story can revolve around the idea of not knowing something. The not knowing of something can even be central to the whole premise of a story!
It's important to make a distinction, though, between things meant to be unfamiliar to the reader, and things meant to be unfamiliar to the characters. Confusing the two things can result in some pretty disappointing writing, so it's worth keeping in mind who you're trying to keep in the dark or who you're trying to reveal something to when you're writing. Let's look at examples of the two different situations:
Unfamiliar to the Audience. Something that's unfamiliar to the reader is a little easier to wrap our heads around because it's based on our own experiences and limitations. I'm convinced that one of the things that made The Martian so successful with audiences is the fact that it made things that most of us know very little about (botany, space, and survival) and taught us about those things as we read along (or watched). By the end of the story, the audience knows a lot more about those three things than they started. Maybe not enough to survive stranded on an alien planet like Mark Watney did, but enough to know a little more about what to do in that situation than before. Or at least to be impressed with the logical progression that Mark Watney took to overcoming a seemingly insurmountable problem.
Unfamiliar to the Character. Something that's unfamiliar to the character can be a little tougher, because you have to walk a thin line between respecting what the character doesn't know and making sure the audience doesn't get too bored waiting for the character to catch up with where they are. A good example of something that's familiar to the audience but unfamiliar to the characters are procedural (like many James Patterson books) where the chapters alternate between what the villain is doing to further his plans and what the hero is doing to foil those plans. A bad example of this kind of narrative are those stories where the hero is stumbling through a series of dull hurdles while we yawn and wait for the hero to have a sudden realization or piece together a clue that's been staring us in the face for chapters and chapters.
When you're working out your stories and characters on the page, keep in mind the element of the unfamiliar and how it can be used effectively both in relation to your characters and your audience. Playing with those relationships and choosing when to reveal which information at what time can mean the difference between an exciting, engaging story and a dull one. Make sure your characters' and audience's experiences with unfamiliar situations are balanced, interesting, and - more than anything - keep them guessing.
Until next time,
Jeff
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EXCERPT: It was a cool evening on August 14, 2004. Fisherman Barry Larkin was enjoying a night of fishing alone on Mervin Lake, which he had done so for the past few years. It was his getaway time from the rest of the world. Barry had gotten to his usual fishing spot and was getting ready to fish when all of a sudden he felt a sharp pain shoot across his body. He grabbed his chest and collapsed on the floor of the boat never to get up again.
EXCERPT: Axel Hadrian was stunned, barely managing to prohibit both his face and his eyes from betraying his emotions. Hadrian, a six two, reddish- haired man with a marked obduracy to his posture, was a Special Forces graduate who had put in five distinguished years as a Ranger. His face was unreadable, especially his ebony eyes. He was a solid stoic man who radiated the competence and strength of his profession. His bearing advertised his practiced confidence. He usually wore a Brioni suit to the Board of Directors’ meetings of Manaplan Export Company, NewYork. Hadrian immediately considered telling Jeffries and “the Board” to shove it and get some other sucker to take up the ‘Labor of Hercules.'
EXCERPT: My husband says that I’m am liar, but I’m not. I know what I saw, he pinched that waitress’ bottom. He claims that I invent things in my head so that I seem more interesting, but that’s simply not true. His claims irritated me so much that I simply had to get away from him. There was no way that he was going to call me a liar and not pay the price for it.
EXCERPT: He jumped in surprise at the sound of screeching and beating wings. Looking out the window he was awe struck by the sight of hundreds of winged bodies rising from the wetland and circling overhead in a haphazard pattern. The flock flying overhead grew as more and more rose from below. He sat transfixed as their wings sounded a cacophonous thrumming. Herons, Egrets, Geese, Pheasants and Gulls to name a few, all circling overhead with the smaller species: Sandpipers, Kites, Kingfishers, and Killdeer… Their numbers blocking out the sun as they circled overhead, their cries echoing eerily along the valley floor.
EXCERPT: Despite being a long-time private investigator, I always had an unease stepping foot in police stations. Cops and P.I.s were on the same side of the law, but to me it felt like being called to the Principal’s office. But, my friend, Sgt. Andy Jenkins, needed my help. It was rare a murder popped up in our town, and, not wanting it to go unsolved, he wanted a fresh set of eyes. He wasted no time with pleasantries as I entered his office gesturing me to sit in a battered chair across from his desk. He shoved a case folder in my hand as I sat down, getting it out of his grip like a hot potato. |
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Feedback from my last newsletter about the pros and cons of law enforcement and private investigations:
DB Cooper writes: "I was a security guard on a toxic waste site so toxic it made it on the super fund list. I was singing, "We are champions." Queen"
Security guards are another great example of law enforcement versus private interests. They have certain powers granted to them by their employers, but rarely do they have the full authority of a law enforcement office to arrest, detain, interrogate, etc.
Quick-Quill writes: "I agree with your first pro and con. I'm writing a detective novel based on a true event. I wrote the first version as it happened. SO WHAT? I didn't even have an ending because its unsolved. SO now I'm adding things that may have happened, and made up as plausible ending. still needs a lot of work but that's what writing this book entails. I would have given up but everyone who knows the story keep asking when it will be ready to read? its been 58 years since it happened, I hope its safe to write it."
Sounds like you already have a lot of interest in the book... not a bad position to be in if your audience is already asking for it before it's finished!
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