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"The possession of knowledge does not kill the sense
of wonder and mystery. There is always more mystery."
-- Anaïs Nin
Mystery Trivia of the Week: In addition to a series of books featuring Nantucket police officer Merry Folger, author Francine Mathews has also written (under the name Stephanie Barron, drawn from her middle and maiden names) a series of historical fiction novels featuring the Jane Austen as an amateur sleuth. The books are presented as lost diaries of the famous author, edited by Barron.
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STANDING OUT
Authors have to compete with a really crowded field. In some genres, there's a little wiggle room like in fantasy and science fiction where distinct subgenres exist to separate and categorize stories into smaller specialties. And in other genres, the wiggle room isn't necessary like in romance where the emphasis is more often on the relationship between the characters rather than the narrative that brings them together. I know that's making some really broad generalizations... but the point is that mystery, in particular, feels like a really crowded field because there are fewer sub-genres than science fiction and fantasy, and there's more of an emphasis on plot than with romances.
A quick perusal of mystery authors on Amazon or Wikipedia will show that there are an awful lot of writers who pen a "Detective [Insert Name Here]" series, or a "Private Investigator [Insert Name Here]" series, or a "Special Agent [Insert Name Here]" series. This can be particularly daunting for mystery readers looking for a new series who might not be able to tell the nuances between Jonathan Kellerman's Detective Alex Delaware, Garry Ryan's Detective Lane, and Ian Rankin's Detective Inspector John Rebus. Writers are fighting for a share of the audience's attention, and it can be difficult when your character is indistinguishable from all of the other characters doing the same thing in mystery novels; i.e., a professional investigator trying to solve a crime.
So how do you stand out from the pack of other authors who are all writing the same kind of story?
Come up with a memorable name. If nothing else, try to come up with a unique name for your character so he or she doesn't get lost in the mass of Detective Steeles and Agent Smiths and Investigator Blacks out there. Names like Stephanie Plum (by Janet Evanovich) and Hieronymous "Harry" Bosch (Michael Connelly) immediately catch the reader's attention because they're unique and unusual. If you're writing in a crowded genre like mystery and you're writing a protagonist with a common, expected job, try to make their name uncommon or unexpected so they don't get lost in all the other noise out there. Incidentally, this is also a great opportunity to exhibit some racial diversity in your writing; Anglo-Saxon and names of other Western-European ancestry are fairly common in American society... but creating a character of Asian, African, or Middle Eastern descent, for example, could add depth to your character and also provide them with a wealth of names that will stand out against all the Jacks, Johns, Bills, and Mikes in contemporary American fiction.
Come up with a memorable twist on the job. Rather than a unique name (or perhaps in addition to), try and come up with a unique take on the actual job itself. Faye Dunaway (and Rene Russo in the remake) is an insurance investigator in The Thomas Crowne Affair. John D. MacDonald's Travis McGee character is a "salvage consultant." Going back to Janet Evanovich's "numbers" series, Stephanie Plum is an amateur bounty hunter. All of these roles are interesting twists on the investigator archetype, and in many cases, the specificity of the job provides ample opportunity for fresh stories that aren't all the same murder, kidnapping, robbery crimes that so many detective characters get stuck with.
Come up with a memorable twist on the character. Rather than a unique name or twist on the job (or, again, perhaps in addition to), try coming up with a character quirk or personality type that is out of the ordinary. So many detectives are tough, cynical, perceptive, etc. that the personalities of different detectives can run together if you read a lot of mystery fiction. Try coming up with something unusual, like the fact that Adrian Monk (from the television series Monk) is brilliant, but also has debilitating Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder and a laundry list of phobias. Veronica Mars (in the television series of the same name) is a high school student who helps her private investigator father solve crimes (while still attending school and helping with her own classmates' problems). And Liv Moore (from the television series iZombie, by the same guy that created Veronica Mars) is a sentient zombie who works in the coroner's office so she has access to brains without having to kill anyone... and solves crimes by getting flashes of memories (and taking on characteristics of) the victims whose brains that she eats.
Unfortunately, with all the competition that's out there these days, a successful writing career isn't necessarily a given just because you've been published. You also have to stand out from all of the other similar types of fiction that are competing for the same shelf space and mental real estate that you want to get from those readers. The best way to accomplish that is to make sure the work you do is original, memorable, and is able to capture the reader's attention.
Until next time,
Jeff
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EXCERPT: He sits quietly and contemplates the darkening sky. Another day done, the ocean breeze cools his skin as he watches the last light catch the sails of the boats in the bay. The pink hues dim as the boaters begin to turn on their running lights. His eyes adjust to the deepening dark with ease. This is his place in the world.
EXCERPT: He groped in his pocket for the key. Unlocking the front door as quietly as possible, he tiptoed into the living room on bare feet. Stumbling, he almost fell into the fireplace. Righting himself with a hand on the mantel, he took a deep breath and prepared an alibi.
EXCERPT: The girl waited patiently by the narrow stretch with her little suitcase by her side. She was not a day older than twenty. People saw her standing there waving for a lift but no one stopped. People are so suspicious and heartless these days. It was so easy to hitchhike in the past.
EXCERPT: "I hope I'm going the right way." I had found myself saying as I pulled my car off to the side of the dirt road. I had been traveling for almost two hours, with nothing but dense forest foliage and dim rays of sunlight to guide me. I cut the engine of my Volvo s70 and swung my door open, eyes narrowing at the crossroad sign before me. The wooden signage was clinging onto one nail, eerily swinging back and forth next to a gigantic tree.
EXCERPT: The dead man pockets contained his journal with a half drunk bottle of moonshine. His eyes and mouth were opened as if in afraid of what they saw. He looked young, but his face appeared as though he'd been in an area where the weather is brutal, with marred by scars and was unshaven. He carried one book in his duffle bag, its cover, read Cthulhu. I could not make heads or tails of of the book.
EXCERPT: Slice, dice, julienne. Each cut had a name and each item sprawled out on the counter had a perfect way to be prepared. This meal had to be just that...perfect. Perfect meal for the perfect day for the perfect act. Mary could not contain the smile that sat plastered on her face for the three hours and twenty two minutes that it had taken her to prepare the menu for today.
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Feedback from my last newsletter about the unfamiliar:
Quick-Quill writes: "Myerstery... how big a genre. from kids BOX CAR mysteries to Perry Mason and on.. What happened? I'm going to find out!! That's a mystery."
Diversity is one of the main reasons I love the mystery genre. From small town law enforcement trying to solve a crime to international action thrillers with spies and the fate of the world in the balance (and everything in between), this genre has something for everybody.
j-bird writes: "Thank you for choosing my chapter as one of your Editor's Picks. I appreciate the recognition and can't imagine a better issue to have it posted than one dealing with mystery and character development. I find it a fine line in balancing the obvious and keeping up the intrigue. Allowing enough information to pique interest is something I am trying to achieve. Time will tell if I accomplish it."
You're very welcome, and best of luck with your writing!
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