Opinions Needed on my 1st story (if i get good responds) |
HELLO~ This will be my first time writing a story if i get a good respond so I'm in need of opinions as to whether i should write my story. I've writen a synopsis of it & hope to hear comments from you. Thanks! Au Revoir, love [tale of two lovers’ forbidden love] A tale about two lovers’ separation because of their difference in status. Synopsis Erika is the beautiful 15-year-old daughter of Winsticuts’ mayor, Lord Bolton. She had been living the life of luxury since young. A carefree and kind spirit whom never had to worry, what would she do when faced with forbidden love? Would she take the risk of losing everything just to be with him? At first glance, Daniel may seem like a typical, charming 17-year-old farm boy with boyish good looks. However, behind that smile, lies a maturing young man faced with different life challenges from his family to the society? What would he do when faced with life-challenging choices? Would he be able to bear the guilt if he followed his heart? Of course there's much more to it but i would like to know your rough opinion by just reading the synopsis. Please do not steal my story if you think its good (well...IF you think it's any good in the first place) |