final scene of the script i am writing. please comment? |
EXT. RIVERSIDE CEMETERY- SUNSET Archie sits on a park bench watching the sun set over the river. Danny is seated beside him. Danny: Didn't think you were the "sunsets" kind of bloke. Archie: I've told you before. Beneath this strikingly handsome exterior is an extremely sensitive guy. You should know that. Danny: Oh, I do. Extremely modest as well. Archie: Of course. They both laugh. Allie walks up behind the two and puts her arms around Archie. Allie: Who were you talking to? Archie looks at the space on the bench beside him. He sighs. Archie: No one... Allie walks around to the front of the bench and crouches so that she is eye-to-eye with Archie. Allie: I don't really know how you feel right now, and I won't pretend to. But it will get easier with time. Archie: He told me he was going to be two hours down the road. Or...or a phone call away. What does he call this? Allie doesn't answer but gives him a short kiss. Allie: We better go. it's about to start. Archie stands up, taking a deep breath. The two walk away and we realise they are in a cemetery. A crowd of people are gathered around a coffin. Allie leads Archie to the front as the priest begins the ceremony. Priest: We are here to celebrate the life of Daniel O'Heare... A smiling photo of Danny is on top of the coffin. Fade to black. |