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A contest entry for Writer's cramp 1/11/11-1/12/11 |
| Change the song, it’s making me weep. What went wrong? What killed the masterpiece of history? What turned the beautiful symphony of life into this, this crude cacophony of missed notes and butchered rhythms, of crushed hopes and tortured existence? What happened? Where is the balance we once had with our fellow men? Why did the rhapsody of love become an ode to empty sin? Could this really be the song—the very song— in which Adam first saw Eve, and in which all of goodness weaved itself the world. What went wrong? Once upon a misty-eyed memory, This song was peaceful and serene. But then, one disenchanted evening, The motley orchestra ceased to ring a joyful melody Instead, the violins screeched in ecstacy and the bass drum pounded for deliverance. Is this a sad, distasteful Bridge to resolution Or the ending Of a song That once deceived? Please. Someone. Change the song. It’s making me weep. 40 lines. |