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Rated: 13+ · In & Out · Other · #1868269
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Every Breath  Open in new Window.   (Rated: 13+)
: Itchy Water~fictionandverse Author Icon @ 05-23-12 @ 5:55pm
A free verse poem that is on the darker side. Honest reviews please.

LIVING IN THE HOLE OF DEPRESSION  Open in new Window.   (Rated: 13+)
: ANN Counselor, Lesbian & Happy Author Icon @ 05-25-12 @ 9:04pm
What a wonderful page. Where in this world did you find the Monkey typist...I like that he's at the old typewriter that i was so proud to own back in 1958...ANN

Drive it Home  Open in new Window.   (Rated: 18+)
: Joto-Kai Author Icon @ 05-29-12 @ 7:34am
11 pages. A man quests for help against his own rage; meanwhile, his wife fears something else entirely. (Love it, hate it, Lemme Know!l! Tell me how much and why! I'm cool*SnowMan*)

Counterstrike  Open in new Window.   (Rated: 18+)
: Grincherella sees candle light Author Icon @ 06-04-12 @ 9:38am
A story I wrote for the Rising Stars Contest for the May Competition. It's about May 1 last year and how two men whose sister respective wife died on 9/11 deal with the news of Bin Laden's death. Thought I'd share it. *Bigsmile* Curious about what you think. *Smile*

A Precious Face  Open in new Window.   (Rated: 13+)
: ANN Counselor, Lesbian & Happy Author Icon @ 06-23-12 @ 10:35pm
Clinical depression has power, for the hope and healing began when i 'see' the precious face.

The Search  Open in new Window.   (Rated: E)
: brom21 Author Icon @ 06-24-12 @ 8:14pm
total rewrite

Schizo  Open in new Window.   (Rated: 18+)
: john h. Author Icon @ 06-25-12 @ 11:14pm
Schizo is a pretty intense, subjective expression of the experience of schizophrenia. i welcome any/all constructive responses.

Bea Leaver-Gentle  Open in new Window.   (Rated: E)
: john h. Author Icon @ 06-25-12 @ 11:22pm
Bea Leaver-Gentle is a poetic depiction of the joyful and sorrowful feelings of a mentally ill homeless woman. i welcome any/all constructive responses.

Over Cups of Coffee  Open in new Window.   (Rated: E)
: ~*Arpita*~ Author Icon @ 06-28-12 @ 8:14am
This is an Indian story, but I hope everyone will be able to relate to it! Would like some in-depth review

SQUIRRELY SQUIRREL (revised)  Open in new Window.   (Rated: E)
: mystic angel Author Icon @ 08-30-12 @ 6:40pm
I hope someone sees this. Monkey soup don't seem to see much traffic. Where is everyone? Please review this.

Moving anxiety and Asthema attacks  Open in new Window.   (Rated: ASR)
: Gifted Young Writer Author Icon @ 10-09-12 @ 3:56pm
Some stuff i've been going through latly

There's that feeling again...  Open in new Window.   (Rated: E)
: KerrieAnnS Author Icon @ 10-27-12 @ 8:42pm
I wrote this earlier in the month when I was having a particularly low moment. Since then I feel I have been really improving but I like to look back on this to remind me of that improvement. I'd love feedback on this please :D

Your eyes are my Salvation  Open in new Window.   (Rated: E)
: KerrieAnnS Author Icon @ 10-29-12 @ 7:46pm
This was written for an interactive story; the prompt made me think of the many times I have fallen prey to panic attacks. There is one person who I always wish was there, because when they are they can bring me back from the brink. Reviews appreciated :D

Fear(1)  Open in new Window.   (Rated: 13+)
: john h. Author Icon @ 12-12-12 @ 7:59am
Fear--edited version: i would welcome any constructive comments to the poem on the left. note: one line is out of line. thank you, j.

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