My older brother wanted me to write a poem about love.
I wrote it with his help. He edited it to fit his recent life experiences and we changed some of the wording to how he would say things.
Title:Aching Hearts
Wrote-July 21st, 2012
When your a young teenager you fall in love.
You have all the time in the world.
But when you've lived for some time, the relationships are more serious and also meaningful.
Your looking for someone to love and when you find them you want the best for her and to be with her.
But when it all comes to an end so suddenly, that your heart cant take the impact that you are all a sudden lost and confused and unsure what to do.
You thought she was the one so you gave your whole heart to her.
She goes on living unfazed while you seem like your the only one who is left behind, broken, and alone.
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