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Ayala never had any doubts that the Shakaree were evil. But then she met one of them. |
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The Shakaree and the Falamar have been at war for generations. The Falamar were sure that their cause was just. After all they were defending their homeland against cruel invaders. Yet when Ayala, a Falamar healer in training, finds herself in a brutal attack she sets out on a journey with an unlikely traveling companion. When they find out how this conflict started they have to find a way to end the strife. But generations of hatred aren't that easy to overcome. I've been writing this novel on and off again for years and sometimes updates take a while. But I'll never abandon the story. The first chapters are a bit heavy on exposition. Any suggestions about how to improve that are very welcome. All other reviews are greatly appreciated as well, of course. The lineart for the cover was done by the wonderful radiant-suzuka (http://radiant-suzuka.deviantart.com/), colors added by me. You can see a bigger version here: http://steffel.deviantart.com/art/Eyes-of-Mist-Cover-382182702 Content: "1 - Peaceful Days"  "2 - Dark Clouds" "3 - Departure" "4 - Voice of the Enemy" "5 - Dark Journey" "6 - The Guardian" "7 - White Woods" "8 - Interlude I: Rivals" "9 - Doubts" "10 - Interlude II: Lies"
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