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Rated: GC · Fiction · Detective · #1997074
A detective must solve a beckoning question.
         David Lowe was a police detective, pulling up outside a house in his blue sedan he was there for a suicide; in the early afternoon there was a report of a shot fired. First responders pulled up and forced entry after no one answered the door, after a few minutes of searching the responders came to the study where it appeared the owner had taken his own life; he put the barrel of a revolver within his mouth against the roof of his mouth and pulled the trigger. He died very quickly. Detective Lowe took it upon himself to investigate; there was actually little crime as of late and idling was not of his preference. He entered the kitchen through the main door, a few police officers were waiting there for him.

         â€śHey Dave, it isn’t pretty. This way.” Officer Michel was a fairly good friend of David, though he had not known him very long. He had only recently joined the forces of the municipal police department, for a mere three years he had known Michel.

         â€śHere.” Michel stepped into the study with Dave following. Dave could not bring himself to look away; his head was tarnished with odd streams of blood coming down, his eyes were pale, absent of the glow they once had. The wound was quite large, still fresh the blood was only starting to darken.

         â€śHow long has he been dead? It had to have been recent, the blood is not dark yet.”

         â€śAbout half an hour, but that’s only our guess.” Officer Michel replied

         â€śYou bag the weapon?”

         â€śNot yet. Why?”

         â€śI am only curious. May I see it?”

         â€śIt’s on his lap. Go ahead.” David walked over and picked it up by the barrel, it was a clear case of suicide; he did not fear he was corrupting the evidence. He set it back down on his lap.

         â€śAny ideas why he did it?”

         â€śI can tell you why.” Detective David Lowe was confused; none of the officers in the room had spoken, nor was the voice that had come of any familiarity. He was slightly alarmed.

         â€śIt’s because I’m not in the room; I’m in your head.” Detective David turned pale, Officer Michel raised the question;

         â€śAre you alright Dave?” David looked at Michel.

         â€śI’m fine.” The voice came again;

         â€śYour not crazy.”

         â€śDave, do you need to go outside for a minute?”

         â€śI think I do.” David left the house, drawing a large breath as he stepped out the door.

         â€śSorry you had to see that.” The voice stated.

         â€śSee what? I’ve seen that act enough.”

         â€śYet you detest it.”

         â€śOf course I detest seeing such a thing, such however is my job alas.”

         â€śI’m aware. No less, I do apologize.”

         â€śWho are you?”

         â€śWho am I? I am the man inside that house.”

         â€śHow could you be? He’s dead, and how can you even be inside my conscious?”

         â€śI suppose I can’t really explain it. Not in a way that makes sense.”

         â€śWell it would only fit, considering it wouldn’t make sense in the first place.”

         â€śAlright then. I won’t try to explain it to you then.”

         â€śMaybe it is best then.”

         â€śPerhaps.” Detective Lowe started walking back inside when the voice came again.

         â€śYou wish to know why he did it?” Detective Lowe stopped.

         â€śIf you could tell me. But how could you?”

         â€śI can tell you why. But do you in truth want to know?”

         â€śOf course. It is my job.”

         â€śBecause of guilt. That was why.”

         â€śWhat guilt?”

         â€śOh, much guilt.”

         â€śWhat kind of guilt?”

         â€śI could tell you. But it wouldn’t show you.”

         â€śWhat are you on about!?”

         â€śYou’ll see. In time, Mr. Lowe” Officer Michel stepped out of the house, he walked over to Detective Lowe.

         â€śAre you alright detective Lowe?”

         â€śI’m fine, you just don’t get used to entirely that sort of thing. At least if you can, I haven’t grown used to it yet.”

         â€śWell, detective Lowe I can’t say I am either. You sure it wasn’t something else though? I didn’t need to leave the room myself.”

         â€śDon’t call me detective, it’s very awkward. Call me David, since your a police officer.”

         â€śAlright then, David. Clear case of suicide, right?”

         â€śYes. How could it be murder?”

         â€śI don’t know. If you don’t, since you’re the detective I certainly wouldn’t.”

         â€śOf course. Is the coroner going to be here soon?”

         â€śShould be a few minutes. Any last things you need to do with him?”

         â€śNo. Nothing immediate.”

         â€śYou need anything David?”

         â€śNo thank you, I appreciate the offer though Officer Michel.”

         â€śIf I can’t call you detective, don’t call me officer.”

         â€śAlright then, what would you rather I call you?”

         â€śCall me Mike.”

         â€śMike, alright then. Well, I’ll be going back to the station now if you need me.”

         â€śAlright. Take care.” Detective Lowe waved goodbye before going back to his car. He opened it and got in. Sitting down in the driver’s seat, he checked his watch; it was one twenty PM exactly. He pushed the key and twisted it; the engine stuttered to action, he began turning right down the road he came from. The drive had been a brief one; the suicide had taken place only a few blocks away, it was still long enough to think about things.

         â€śIt’s usually so calm, isn’t it?” The voice spoke out. He came to a stop at the intersection before he dared to reply to it.

         â€śWhat is it you want? Why are you still here?”

         â€śI want nothing. I am here because I cannot leave.”

         â€śHow are you here in the first place?”

         â€śI don’t know. Do you?”

         â€śDon’t play mind games.” Finally the traffic had cleared long enough to allow detective Lowe an opening; he took it and turned right continuing the drive to the precinct.

         â€śI didn’t know we were playing a game.”
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