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Writing prompt: jump "Just one more step...one final step." "Jump, Jimmy. Jump!" "We are waiting for you..." ... Those voices in my head, they have been there for as long as I can It has always been just me and them, in this lonely world void of "Now, one more step" I whisper to myself, unaware of whether It's snowing, and the cold is as bitter as the taste in my "Jump, Jimmy!" Damn voices. Why am I doing this anyway? I can hear my heart thumping and my pulse rising; I can feel every Why am I doing this? "We are waiting for you." Yet I can't go back this time, not here, not when I'm this Just one more step. And I jump. ... Time seems to stop. Snowflakes land on my face. I can almost feel Splash, and everything goes into a dreadful silence. I can't move. The water is numbing, and my senses are shutting It's so calm here, so peaceful. I should have been here long ... Thump. Warmth. What is this sensation? Thump. A surge of life runs in my veins. Thump. My head is cracked open with an explosion of thoughts. Thump. Electrifying. And strangely ecstatic. Thump. "Jimmy?" Those voices again? Why are they here? Thump. Thump. Thump. ... My eyes burst open. And amid the abysmal darkness, I see a ray of light, radiant and And another light, and another, and another... "JIMMY!" .... --------------------- I open my eyes, burdened with fatigue. Where is this place? Why am I here? And what is this thing in my nose? These tubes? I grab the wire and fling it away with an utterly frail movement, Who is he? "Jimmy? Mom, it's Jimmy!" "Oh my god Jimmy, you're awake!" "After all these years Jimmy, we have been waiting for you!" Waiting for me... Such familiar voices. Who are they? |