SNOW MAN

i started writing light novel in this site today.
at first, sorry for my english grammer and everything in sentense.
i start to getting know the english. and my final goal is see a drama or movie
without korean subtitles.
yeah, i am korean.
so let's begin.
oh and could you guys please comment about my story. because i want to know my words spelling correct and also the grammer.

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once upon a time
there is a snowman.
he was built by child who lives near the river.
he is wearing a scarf and nothing.
because the child who built this snowman was so poor.
it was in winter. but the child had only a scarf but given to snowman
he was so cold but at least he could smile.
because finally he had a frined.
made of snow.
the child put a smile on a snowman to make his friend always happy.
and the child said
"finally. i have a friend with smile"

suddenly
sky is seperated in to two ways
and clouds are getting darker.
?? is shoked the snowman.

"snow..man..? are you ok?"

but there is no answer.

"snowman?"

it was than,
snowman is moving his hand.
he moves makes his own legs for walk.
and he makes his mouth larger for speak.
finally he said.

"dang you child. i was freaking cold.
you just give me this scarf in this winter?"

but the child couldn't answer.
because his mouth got freezed by cold.
and he is so sleepy.

"oh no. you can't die like this.
without you, i am just freaking monster.
only you can understand my story to being living snowman!!"

snowman starts to hug the child.
but it's getting worse
because snowman is cold.

"oh.dang give me a break. seriously, god?"

he try to think for save the child from cold.

"ah! that's it! igloo can work!"

snowman starts to get punched his body to make igloo by his body.
and cover the child's body.

few hours later.
child is wake up.
and he can't see the snowman.
because snowman is changed to igloo.

he hug his friend and sleep in a peace.

THE END