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The Heiresses is on the run From the Evil that hunts her.
[Introduction]
Kilanya-A girl with silver eyes and Black hair. She was left in the care of a Noble familyfor her mother was sick, and her father was at War. Both her parents died before she was 3 years of age. When the the family was killed she was spared for she was not of their blood. She is the Lost Heiresses.(Elven Rose Author Icon)
Yakina-A warrior with blue hair and black eyes. She was born upon the world of NiteronShe is Sworn to protect the light Savior who is her princess and heiresses to the Grand thrown.(ryter1)
Kiete-A black haired gold eye warrior in Prince Uson's army who is tje lost prince of Kinthon. His mother was the queen of Kinthon but she wanted him to grow up normal. Sadly She died after she named him.(White Tiger Author Icon)
Uson- A possessed Prince who used to be kind and wanted peace. The spirit Demon Kivos took him over till his Destined body summons him. The prince is still inside but cannot control his body.(love_is_sacred)
Kivos- Kilanya's Sworn enemy who want to take the Thrown but has no current body of his own.(love_is_sacred till someone claims him and since he is in Uson's body )
Kiren-a boy with silver eyes and black hair with blue streaks in it. he is Kilanya's twin brotherhe had been sent to Corton while his mother was sick and father at war. he was taken in by the royal family of the planet but his sister was forgotten since the family was killed.(AngelinTwilight Author Icon )
traven-a young boy mage who trieds to reunite Kilanya and Kiren but is having a hard time. he was born on the magic prone planet Venshi and he was raised on Trantos. He has white hair and eyes that change with his mood and his base is Grey.( )
Mia-a girl with silver hair and eyes. she is the Princess of Celesta.She is to be the second advisor of Kilanya.(BROCC-ZILLA Author Icon)
Kia-A girl who is the Heir to the planet Lunata thrown. She has Golden eyes and hair. She has run away from the wars or was Kiddnapped but no one knows so all the Wars all stoped and the hunt for Kia began.(Daizy Author Icon)
Tynia-a Girl with Blue hair with black streaks, Eyes that are a dark Black, She has been an Outcast her whole life so she went to become a warrior.(Giggles/Grins is a comedian Author Icon)
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Planets
Nitron-a planet which makes girls have bule hair and boys have black w/blue highlights their eyes can be any shade of blue,black or Red. Most boys have blue or black eyes and most girls have Red or blue.
Kinthon-A planets who's Royal family has gold eyes but when Elemental Demons attacked the Queen fled the planet so that she and her child was not killed in an attack.
Heathen- a war planet where most warriors recive their trainning. The natives have Bloodred eyes and hair like fire. THis planet is somewhat Dangerous.
Drandos- This planet is held under Demon influence and their current king is Possessed by a Spirit Demon
Brenton- the planet where prince Uson's army resides. the planet has a lot of divers regions. A good planet to do battle tactices.
Renkos-the planet where Kilanya was born the royal families eyes were silver the queen died of Posion and the king died in war. the two heirs were lost.
Kontos- The planet where the Grand thrown resides and where everyone is at peace with each other.
Corton-a planet that the people have worked to preserve. all their homes are made by dead or into natural sources and nature around them. they Respect life much
Venshi-a planet that is half medevilearth and half like Corton. most magic prone people who are Elemental Mages live on the side like Corton.
Trantos- a planet that mages choose what their element is. All the sifferent elements are found some where on Trantos.
Kindrone-a planet which is like on big kingdom but is many castles owned by prince Uson. The few Forest are small as are the plains but they are beautiful. Each castle on the planet is used at least once a year.
Celesta- a star dust covern planet where the Valuable star silk is made. The star dust can only be harvested at night and it's night most of the time, they have 2 hours of sunlight.
Lunata- This planet has had many civil wars that the planets surface is partly in ruins but in the areas protected by barriers are beautiful.Lunata has long days and short nights. can have a lunar mist at times covering the planet.
It was night when a girl with silver eyes and black hair shoot up in bed. She had a nightmare again of her families death. 'why me what did i do.' she thought. she went out to her favorite tree in the little guarden by her home. She was only 13 but had a home of her own. She was not living on the same planet anymore that she was raised on for as long as she could remember. She was on the planet Corton. 'These dreams are difficult to understand I guess i just need to clear my mind' thought Kilanya.
Tynia woke early in the morning. today was going to be another long day especially since it was another another year of training. Tynia grew up on Nitron. She has always been an outcast though because she has blue hair with black streaks, the only one on her entire planet. So, she came to Heathen to become a warrior.
Mia sighed and twisted the last curl of her silver hair into place. The 19 year old girl's eyes flashed as she watched the the glittering in her mirror. The landscape was glittering with reflections from lightning.

The silver silk of her gown brought out her feminimity. Giving herself a final glance, she walked out onto her balcony. She watched the star dust being harvested and walked back inside. When she turned around she decided to go down to the courtyard, where she heard something.

She saw a guy lying on the ground. She couldn't let the gaurds find him..they'd been in such a bad mood lately.
Kiren was walking around in the ruins of his old home. He was searching for a weapon that he had been forced to leave behind. He was looking in the throne room. Once grand and beautiful. Now it was dark and dank. Searching around the throne he found the old sword he had been promised by his farther. It was stained with blood and the dull blue metal showed no signs of the brilliant light it once radiated. He put it into the scabard which he had held onto. He looked around with his silver eyes and ran his hand through his black hair and played with one of the streaks of blue.

"Why didn't I die "he asked the darkness?


Kia, a girl of 18, needed to escape. She wanted to go home to her family, but she just couldn't. Prince Uson had kidnapped her and had never even said why. She was heavily guarded at all times to prevent her leaving from the castle, but other than that she was treated like the princess she was. Kia had a beautiful room and was allowed to wander the castle at her leisure, but it wasn't enough. She needed to go home.

From the news she had overheard, the wars on Lunata were finally over. Search parties had been send out to look for her, but no one would ever guess that she was on Brenton. However, there was one person who might help her if she asked, a warrior named Kiete. He seemed honorable, all Kia had to do now was talk to him. Maybe he'd help her...


Kiete sighed as he stood his full size, a mere six two in height. His eyes scanned the area but there was nothing, everything was so desolate.
          Kiete was nearing his twenty first birthday, not that it entirely mattered. He was a young man, a young man who hardly knew his past. All he wanted was freedom from this cage, to know who he truly was.
         Kiete sheathed his long sword. And moved his long black hair behind his ears out of the way of the breeze. He then surveyed the damage around him. Bodies coursed up and down the plains. He had only hoped that tomorrow would be a better day.
Kilanya walked throught her forest and called her pet wolf to her side. "Kiko what is it about these dreams that make me uneasy?" said Kilanya as she walked to the little village that was close to her home.
Tynia got up at the morning bell. She hurried out of her barracks kinowing it was going to be another long day of ridicule and shame. Tynia looked at the newcomers. She was new too but she had been an outcast all her life. She went over to the mess hall and noticed that there were no ther girls.

'Why can't I be normal?' she asked herself then found a place in the back of the room to eat.
Mia sighed and discovered it was only a cat running around outside. The gaurds were going to torture a cat..they needed a vacation..or a visit to a nice psychiatrist.

"I wonder what's going on everywhere else?"
Kiren just wanted to scream. His home was nothing but a ruin and his family was dead. But he felt alone more than anything. He screamed out loud for what felt like an eternity. He kicked a old bucket and fell to his knee's. His hands lay in the dusty soot and he breathed in the rank stench of the place he had once called home.

"I swear...Upon the blood of my family. I will find the dogs responsible fore this and I will have my vengence "he said aloud to the decaying ruin.
When she got to the Village Everyone said hello and walked away from her. She went to the butcher and go a few Scraps Kiko. When she went by the sewing mistress and Material Shop she noticed a Gorgious flowing Silver Material. she heard this."Well this i cannot sew for some odd Reason could you see if you can sell it for me?"asked Kikina "Sure madam" said the shop boy. after Kikina left Kilanya went and bought the material and some thread and a needle. She went home and Started to Sew her a Dress ment for Royalty. After three days she had the dress done and put it on. She looked Stunning The dress Accented her Hair and Silver Eyes well. She knew now that she needed to go to another Planet to wear this Stunning Dress. When she went and picked up her mail she had a letter asking her to come to a Dance on Venshi. Everyone was surprised that Kilanya of all people was invited and then she reminded them that she was part of a noble family. When time came for her to go a Mage came and picked her up she had her dress packed carefully and Whisled for Kiko to come. When she got on Kiko hopped into her lap. When they landed the royal family came to greet her and welcome her to their castle. When the ball came Kilanya put on the dress she made and waited for the Mage to come pick her up. Kiko's fur changed to silver that night to accent her mistress. When the Mage got there he was stunned by the beauty of kilanya in her dress. When the mage got his composure back he held his arm out to the lady of Star and walked her to the ballroom. When the mage left her and introduced her to the Ball room she heard Gasps through out the room. Then with a Graceful Descend Kilanya joined the party, She was Asked by traven to dance once and then she was wisked away to dance with the prince of the land.
Mia sighed when she felt something weird. The next thing she knew she was falling from the air in some strange place. She tried to scream, but she only had time to make a squeak before she landed on a hard slab of granite. "Owwww." She sighed, her hair fluffing into her eyes. "Why does it always happen when I ask a question..i ask something then poof i don't know where I.." She found herself looking up at someone slightly familiar looking. "Am.."

"Well...hello.." The man sighed.

"Hello.." Mia smiled, looking around. She glanced at her hands. Her skin always looked glowey in the moonlight. She also sunburned in like a second. The two stared at each other for a moment. Her mind flashed back to a council meeting when she was very small. She was hiding behind her mother's leg when she saw two small dark haired children. The boy smiled at her and kept going.

"That's Prince Kiren.." Her mother smiled.

She snapped back to reality and was about to say his name when he said hers. "Mia." He sighed. "Nice to see someone isn't dead.."
He was very sullen indeed. Nothing was the same anymore. For all he knew was that he may very well be the last.

"It's been a while "he said sitting down.

"Not that long "she said looking around.

"Hmmmp yer only a few years "he laughed.

He looked at her and took a handful of the dirt from the floor and let it pour out of his hand.

"You've certainly grown alot "he said breaking down into tears.


The warriors all gathered in a room with Prince Uson. Kiete stood in the back and Kia grabbed his arm and pulled him out of the room.

"What the-" He started.

"Please Kiete, I need your help."

"How do you know my name?"

"I watched all the warriors. You seem to be the only one with honor."

He looked closely at her. "Hey you're that princess Uson kidnapped."

"Please, I need help escaping." She said. "Luntata was is the middle of a civil was when I was taken. I just have to go home.
Kiete narrowed his eyes and this shook his head. "You must not speak of such a thing here." He told her. "If you must come to my chambers at midnight, we shall talk then."
         "What if Uson will not allow me to come?" She questioned.
         "He will." Kiete said. "Just trust me."
Tynia stood after breakfast and headed sown to stables where they were going to choose their mounts. As usual the boys got first pick and I got the rowdy, uncontrollable horses of the bunch. I sighed and tacked up my mounts.

We started practicing when I noticed that the General was talking to someone. Must have been important because he was acting funny. Then he looked at me with a discusted look then turned back to the other person.

"Tynia! Get over her now!" he yelled. I nuged my mount into a canter and then dismounted beside him.

"yes General." I said.
"This is Tynia." he said completely ignoring my question.
"A girl?" he said.
I looked past the general and saw another armored man.
"Yes. Tynia, this is a scout for Pince Uson. He heard about you and came to investigate." he said with some sarcasm.
I nodded toward the scout.
"Grab your sword. Let's see what you a miserable can do." that got me mad. We walked to another arena.
A small group gathered as we prepared for the battle.

I shook my head. He unsheathed his sword and started towrd me. I blocked his first attack and went for one of my own. He blocked also. This went on for a while until he got me in the arm.
"Pitiflu." he sneered and then said, "Do you need a break little girl?" some of the gatheres paled slightly. I may not have been liked but the one thing I was known for was my temper.

I attacked him quickly and within second he was pinned and bleed profusley. My general eneded the match. I got off of the scout. I looked at my arm and saw it was't that bad.

The scout looked furious and sad at the same time.
"Pack your bags. You're leaving." he said then stormed away to find a healer.
"Kiren.......wait a minute..I thought you were dead..." I said, kneeling down beside him.

"I might as well be.." He cried.

"Don't say that...they all need you..you can't give up now.. I know they're alive.." I said, wrapping my arms around him in a comforting way.

"Go away." He said.

"NO. I'm not letting you go."

"Great....so atleast one of us wants me to live "he sighed standing up.

He was still angry that he could not do anything to save his family. All he had left now was his fathers sword. But he couldn't turn his back on people in need...not again.

"I'll help...but don't expect me to be all heroic and princly...I'm done turning my back and walking away...I'm going to make who ever is responsible for this Pay "he said kicking his foot along the ground making a cloud of dust and dirt.


Kia was doubtful that Prince Uson would let her go. But at eleven forty, she left her room. There was no guard at the door. That was unusual. Perhaps Kiete had arranged it...

Wrapped in a thick robe to ward off the night chill, she made her way to Keite’s chambers. Once there she knocked softly. There was no answer. She slowly opened the door.

“Kiete? Are you here?” She went inside, cautiously and called out softly again. "Kiete?"

"You don't have to whisper. It's safe in here. We can speak freely." He said coming out of the shadows. Lighting a candle, he motioned her to sit down and he sat across from her.

"So Kiete, can you help me escape?"
Kiete took a long look at the Princess. Slowly he nodded. "I will help. But it must be done in secret. If I am found out they will surely kill us both."
          Kia nodded. "But how-"
          "Wait for twenty minutes. By that time the guards will have taken a break at the east wall. Go there, someone by the name of Joarth will be waiting for you. Go with him. I will meet you shortly." He explained.
Kilanya was sad memories plauged her but she could not tell what or when they happened only that she was really young. She sat down not to long after she finished dancing with some of the other men at the ball, She wished however that the one who asked her first could ask her again. She thought he was a fine dancer and smiled. ~What is it that I truely want to do?~she asked herself. It was to walk in the rose guardin. she loved the roses when they bloomed.
Tynia grabbed her bags and waited for the man to reappear. He showed up a few minutes later with another. I nodded and waited for further instructions.
Suddenly we were at a castle and the one thing I noticed was that it was dark. 'Must be night here' I thought.

i noticed barracks quite a ways off and when the scout started walking towards the castle I was surprised but didn't say anything. Soon we were met by one scary looking guy.

"Hello." he said. The scout nooded.
"So where is he?" the man asked. I saw the scout scowl then he turned ad moved out of the way.
"A GIRL!" could be heard for miles away. It was infact and the army rushed and was there in a second.
Mia

"They might already be dead. But I don't know. I don't think your entire family is dead..." I sighed.

"They are...I couldn't.." He said, near to tears again.

"Kiren.." I sighed, not knowing how to comfort him.
He felt her putting her arms around him. She was hugging...no holding him. his arms wound round her back.

"Why would you even care...I'm a failier. I'm no prince...I don't even deserve to help...I'm worthless "he cried into her chest.

It was as if every negative thaught he'd had in the past week had taken hold of him.

"Stop it...you are not worthless you are Prince Kiren...nothing can take that away from you...Now you can either get up and suck it up or you can sit there crying like a baby "she said sternly telling him exactly what he needed to hear.

She let go of him and he stood up. He wiped his eyes and looked very determined.

"Don't ever tell anybody I was crying like that...I couldn't stand it people laughing at me for it "he sighed with red eyes were he had rubbed them.
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Yakina stood at the window of the rebel headquarters on her home planet.

"Kina, stop starin' out that window, you ain't gonna see nothin' new." Kit, one of Yakina's fellow rebels.

"Oh, shut your mouth, Kit! Kina's mind works best when she's starin' off into space, you know that!" Jaynen said.

"Whatever Jayne." Kit answered. "Kina, what you thinkin' 'bout anyway?"

"Not much," Yakina replied.

Jaynen faked a laugh. "Yeah right! You're thinkin' about the assignment Alex gave ya."

Yakina was silent.

"You're also thinkin' about how you don't wanna leave us behind to fight the Darklights." Jaynen continued.

"And that you don't wana go to Lunata to talk with Keite about the princess." Kit added.

Yakina sighed, "You two know me better than anyone else here." She smiled slightly and continued. "The three of us are tight, which makes it hard to leave."

"Kina, everything's gonna work out fine, you are gonna go find the Lunatan princess, and Kit and I are gonna stay here and hold back the Darklights." Jaynen said.

"What good is findin' the Lunatan princess and fightin' Draklights gonna do? We need the Light Savior!" Kit asked in an exaspereated tone.

"Finding the Lunatan princess could lead to finding the Savior, and if the Darklights are busy fighting, us, they can't go after the Savior. So by keeping them on Nitron, we give the agents searching for the Savior time to find their charge." Yakina said, turning to face her friends.

"Why can't Kil..." Kit began.

"Kit, we ain't s'posed to use the Savior's true name! If the Darklights find out who the Savior really is, it'll be a race to find the girl! We have to keep their focus on us, we have to fight and keep them blind!" Jayne excliamed.

"The Heiress doesn't need our protection!" Kit shouted. "It's us that need her!"

"Kit, cool it! The people of this planet are..." Jayne began.

"Dyin'!" Kit interupted furiously. "Our people are dyin' beacuse our so called 'Savior' isn't savin' us!"

"How can you expect her to?" Jayne said, equally angry as her friend. "She may not even know about her responsability yet!"

"So we s'pposed to sit here and fight a battle that we all know we can't win?"

"Ladies, stop it!" Kina shouted. The other girls looked at her. "Kit, this battle isn't hopeless! Our people are stong fighters, you know that. All you guys have to do is hang in there until the Savior is found!"

"Why's it taking so long?" Kit asked. "We know everythin' about this girl, don't we?"

"Yeah, I guess we know everything relevant in finding her, but it's difficult to get near her. Eighteen of our twenty agents are dead, the other two are missing. The other planets aren't have much luck either. Supposedly the Lunatan princess knows how to get to her, but Uson has her."

"Right, so how are

Kilanya walked through the guarden and looked at the different types of flowers. She was looking at the flowers when heard someone behind her. She Was nervous as she saw that it was only Kiko. She smiled and bent down to pet her. "Kiko do you think that Im more then i seem?" she said as she tried to get rid of the feeling that someone was watching her with evil intentions.
Tynia shook her head and glared at the man who had yelled.

"Yes, a girl. A poor pathetic girl. Too bad you scout is even more pathetic. He got woopped by yours truely in a duel. Oops." I said with a sneer.

The scout scowled even further. Soon I noticed that another man was comeing. I noticed the respect he got and figured him to be a high ranking officer.

"Sir." the scout said.

"Where is the new recruit I sent you to find?" he asked.

I smirked but quickly wiped it off my face as the officer turned to look at me.

"I thought I said to bring me a warrior, not a servant." he said condescendingly.

That got me pissed. Without even indicating I was going to do anything I had the officer pinner in a second with my sword at his neck.

"I am not a servant and I will neer bow to the likes of you. I am a warrior and a good one at that." I hissed.

I was dragged off by two other warriors while the first officer stood. As soon as he was standing her glared and sneered at me.

"Where am I staying?" I asked.

He pointed off somewhere.

"My horses?" I asked.

"Will be here tommorow."

I nodded and marched off to my barracks. Stupid men.
Mia sighed and looked at him. She wished he she could do something, anything to make him feel better. Instead, she stood up and offered her hand to him.

She helped him up and they both looked up towards the moon.

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