Back here after rather a long absence. I don't know what I'm looking for or trying to develop, so I'm kind of excited to throw some spaghetti at the wall and see what sticks. Before I was looking into fear, but now I'm hoping to look at emotion in poetry and how to give the reader a very visceral experience through word. And heck, maybe if I'm lucky I'll also figure out how to work successfully with strict poetic form. So in feedback I would particularly appreciate focus on how well you can immerse yourself in the experience, whether something shakes you out of that, and if I've violated the laws of poetry (where I'm brave enough.)