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ASIN: 047339510X
ID #114284
Catching the Last Tram   (Rated: 13+)
Product Type: Book
Reviewer: Choconut Author Icon
Review Rated: E
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Summary of this Book...
Oh, my word. I really disliked this book. There is a wonderful concept here: magic and love with a little paranormal thrown into the mix. It promised so much. But, unfortunately, it did not deliver.

My main problem was the author’s writing ability. I mean, it felt incredibly amateur. I wonder whether she has ever had a writing lesson or been told about the importance of showing a story. I don’t think there’s one part of the story that is shown. Not. One.

I did like the story a little more the closer it got to the end. My interest increased. However, the tire story is a series of almost-identical tram rides in which nothing really happens.

I like the magical and paranormal aspects. But the writing itself, not good.
I especially liked...
The magic. When I finished it.
I didn't like...
The author’s poor writing habits.
The author of this Book...
Needs to work on her skills.
I don't recommend this Book because...
It’s not good.
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