I really like this as is but I share some thoughts:
Now go the hell away. Very good use of this line. I'd make it the title unless a specific event or place comes to mind. Like "Workshop, May 32nd, Highway-to-Hell, Nevada".
I'd find active verbs for each use of 'is' and replace each 'the'. Like "May's sky screams blue; Spring's sea blooms green". This provides a season and action, sound, something.
Could use a grammar check unless you like it as is. Grammar is less important in poetry; this isn't an essay. For a definite pause (like for rhythm) you can use an emdash instead of a comma like: "I kid you not — nature's obscene,"
To add "darkness" to it... this is that season...
Explorers with lost souls explore,
Search worlds they've never searched before,
They'll kid you not — forevermore,
Now go the hell away.
It is written that humans are made in God's image. If we look at ourselves do we find a reflection of God's Trinity? We know that the human brain is made up of two distinctly different sides. It could be said that we have two brains, the right to combine thoughts (creation), the left applies logic (order). But what about the third part? Maybe it's the soul or spirit of Love. I guess the point is that we'll probably never understand the complexity of God, but can find joy in His everlasting forgiveness in Jesus' name. Welcome home.
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