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I have updated my poem "The Dancing Cloud"
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I was imagining what a dancing cloud would feel like if I were in its shoes.
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. This makes number fifty-one out of the first hundred that I have updated. If you have the time, please read it over. Let me know how you like it.
I updated my story "Is Your Individuality Propelled?"
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I updated my poem to be easier to read
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once again, because, in my opinion, this makes more sense.
I have updated one of my poems, "Snowy Cold Rain."
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These are some thoughts some may have regarding winter.
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. This makes100100 number 50 out of 100 that I have updated. These are the first ones that I had written. If you have the time, please read it over again. It should be an improvement.
I read it again as I had already reviewed this. It is still well defined with good reflections.
I have updated my poem "An Escape From Doom
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A poem of a stressed child inside of a womb of what they must be thinking.
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. This makes 49 items out of the first 100 that I have gone back and updated. If you have the time, please read it again. It should make a better read.
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I review it.
It's a wonderful poetry.
I have updated my poem, "My Wishful Hope" (
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Watching the impeachment hearings, I decided to write a poem of encouragement.
#2211664 by Anna Marie Carlson Author IconMail Icon
. If you have the time, please read it over and let me know what you think. This makes number 48 out of the first 100 that I've updated.
I have updated one of my former poems, "The Lampshade Suite"
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I did this for fun, a lot of rhyme with a play on words.
#2211194 by Anna Marie Carlson Author IconMail Icon
. If you have the time, please read it over and let me know what you think. This makes number 47 out of the first 100 that I have updated.
I have revised my story, "Is Your Individuality Propelled?"
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I updated my poem to be easier to read
#2210306 by Anna Marie Carlson Author IconMail Icon
. This is #46 out of 100 that I have went back to and revised. If you have the time, please give it a read and let me know what you think about it.
I have updated my story entitled, "Sober Up (feat. Rivers Cuomo)
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48-HOUR CHALLENGE: Media Prompt
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. Feel free to read this again as the pattern and the words have been improved.
I updated my story "Paradise Island"
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I thought of having our own private island for writing that's free from distractions.
#2210056 by Anna Marie Carlson Author IconMail Icon
} This makes number 45 out of 100 that I've updated so far. Read my story over if you have the chance.
I have updated my story "The Trilogy of the Prompts."
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There were three prompts in a writing class, and I combined all three.
#2208198 by Anna Marie Carlson Author IconMail Icon
. I have clarified my story to make it sound better. This makes #44 out of 100 that I have updated so far. I hope you enjoy reading my writing.
I have updated my poem "The Speaking Cloud."
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I entered this for "The Writer's Cramp", but was disqualified, but I'm not giving up.
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. I am hopeful this will bring forth a positive message for someone today. This makes the 43rd poem out of 100 that I have done so far.
I have updated my story "The Defeat of the Elite"
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This is an attempt of a speech.
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. I have stated my point of view more clearly. I hope that it won't be offensive to anyone. It's a challenge to write something that not everyone agrees with.
Hey! I upgraded my story "Happy" by Pharrell Williams
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48-Hour Challenge Media Prompt. 500 word count.
#2207109 by Anna Marie Carlson Author IconMail Icon
. I hope this puts a smile on your face. In a world filled with uncertainty, we don't see a lot of smiles. We can make a difference when we can make someone happy.
I changed the name of my poem from "It Could Have Been Perfect" to "It Would Have Been Perfect"
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The title was used from a prompt that I was going to enter for a contest; a 40 line poem.
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. I updated my poem. I noticed I didn't have 40 lines to my poem. I have changed that. I hope you like the updated version. Notice how the pattern turned out; I thought it was interesting.
I have updated "The Lonesome Trees of Winter
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I was thinking how lonesome the trees must get during the wintertime.
#2206084 by Anna Marie Carlson Author IconMail Icon
. This makes number 39 out of 100 needed towards a book. You will enjoy my updated version. I truly felt that I did a good job on this. It has a positive and uplifting message from the loneliness the trees feel in wintertime to bringing back the livelihood and restoration of the springtime.
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