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The re-write for the Phoenix: A Tale of Rebirth will be posted at this link: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/4945.

For everyone that enjoyed the story, thank you for your support. Hopefully, you'll all enjoy this too.
Ok its almost 12pm (London time) so Ive posted the folder for the re-write, the prologue is a part of it. I will be posting the first couple chapters right now so I hope everyone enjoys.
Prologue of the re-write coming on the 17th of January.

Tell your friends!!!
Okay, so for everyone interested, I've been working on a re-write for the phoenix tales. This (including the orginial draft) will be the third draft of the book. This will include changing around a lot of the characters and some serious plot points, but I'm certain that this will make for a better story overall. Thank you for your patience and I hoped you all had a happy new year!
Congratulations on your accomplishments and welcome to WDC - from one Newbie to another :)

Sabaka

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So good to see you in Newbies Showcase! Well done!:)
I've just edited a new item in my portfolio:
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*Candycaner* Hey! You are looking good out there! Just flitting by to say hi and how is it going? *Fairy* Hope you can bring your flair to our group party on Thursday.*Santahat*
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I don't know what I don't know, I ask if and when the need arises. (while you're here try reading my story)
Hi FruitSeller

I just thought I would drop by and see how you are doing on Writing.Com. Do you have any questions you need to ask? Please don't hesitate to let me know if you do. You can always send me an email.

Leah

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Not sure if I ever answered so, here it is:
First off, hello, its nice of you to drop by.
Secondly, check out my stuff and share and review what you like.
Thirdly: I gave your portfolio a look and if I'm being honest I only have so much love for dogs. You surpassed me in that front. Congrats. I did see some fantasy stuff which was cool but I'm a bit streched for time so I'll write a review as soon as I can.
And lastly, I don't really have any questions at the moment and honestly, I probably won't ask if I do. I'd rather figure it out.
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Chapter 5 has been completed, its title: "Dawns' Incursion"
Get ready to love Frode and learn that much more anout dear old Toby.
I have released
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Robert encounters the Masked Ones, a zealous and mysterious religous faction. (wc: 3861)
its the first real story arc that goes beyond just introducing characters, etc. (don't worry, Roberts goal is still to find his mother, I'll be sure not to lose sight of that) this is a big step in his journey and I hope you enjoy it as much as I do.
Okay so chapter four is done and will be online by Sunday (day light saving time) hopefully you enjoy, its been a real joy to write.
(can i admit that chapter three was still probably more fun to do).
For the record, I just did a huge spelling and gramma overhaul. All three chapters should be much better, as will all following chapters.
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In Black Sheep I, as Robert, introduce this new fantasitcal world. (word count: 3777)

Aparently there was a bunch of mistakes that I didn't notice...*Sad*
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