I've just edited an item in my portfolio:
Where do I begin... I EDITED. I believe a scrapped at least half of the "was"s, the "had"s and the "going to"s. I didn't realize that almost 1% of the words I use is "was"! I also removed a bunch of descriptive words and restructured some of the paragraphs. I've still got lots to do! |
I've just edited an item in my portfolio:
I'd like to thank everyone again for thoroughly reviewing my article, it helped me out a lot! I changed "a few year ago" to "a few years ago". Thank you for catching that! I noticed that the article said "in the news" and I changed that to "on the news". And for anyone that would want to know more about postcrossing: https://www.postcrossing.com/ I have now removed the GP award for reviews of this article. Thanks again fro the reviews! Eira |
I've just edited an item in my portfolio:
Here it goes! My first actual entry on WdC. I'm both excited and afraid for what people will think about it. I think I did at least a decent job, but I am looking forward to any critical review. I want to improve this first Aluinnia chapter! I forgot to specify that this was actually a chapter from a bigger story in the description, so I edited that. |