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Forsooth! - B2 or Not B2 Open in new Window. (E)
an actor must choose wisely
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Cracked Circle of Life Open in new Window. (ASR)
Some people cannot face the reality of death until first run through a filter. 1,195 wds
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Cracked Circle of Life Open in new Window. (ASR)
Some people cannot face the reality of death until first run through a filter. 1,195 wds
Please review = then let me know, is the creature real, what do you think Robert is experiencing? Any errors in POV, Show not tell, etc.
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The Firelight Honor Open in new Window. (E)
... the crowd murmured as firelight flashed on his knife blade ...
reopened to share as Veterans' day is approaching
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 You Gotta Be Kidding Open in new Window. (E)
Sarah receives a disturbing cellphone call from George.
not autobiographical, in case you wondered!
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Young-Adult Readers & Classics, Really? Open in new Window. (13+)
Some surprising stories you wouldn't normally connect to these classic authors
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Adventures In Haiku - Open in new Window. (E)
This essay developed from my introduction for a breakout session at a writers' conference.
updated for the re-edit as published in a literary blog.
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Aura Of Authority Open in new Window. (E)
Cool lake waters, hot beach sand, and a powerful red whistle.
edited for syntax errors I'd not noticed before!
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Some people cannot face the reality of death until first run through a filter. 1,195 wds
changed point of view, to make this more ominous.
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Zuk and Zobb - A Fable For Our Time Open in new Window. (E)
from the dawn of time - how fur became a fashion statement. Soon a Radio Play script
added Umber Blot's title
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Adventures In Haiku - Open in new Window. (E)
This essay developed from my introduction for a breakout session at a writers' conference.
correction of punctuation made this more readable
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Hush Open in new Window. (E)
Another attempt at Haiku, traditional style with the conclusion as the center line.
in traditional styling, which might also be Senryu for some readers
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Adventures In Haiku - Open in new Window. (E)
This essay developed from my introduction for a breakout session at a writers' conference.

I rearranged where the challenge is placed
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The Firelight Honor Open in new Window. (E)
... the crowd murmured as firelight flashed on his knife blade ...
The site Fabula Argentea (Silver Story) will be reprinting this during the week of our Fourth of July, to remind us of what we were, and what we must always strive to be.
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Doc's Scuttlebutt Cap Open in new Window. (E)
Sea Scouts add crowd-pleasing prank for the controlled, silent chaos of Scuttlebutt Hoist.
Several land-lubber folks had asked for a more visual description of "spars" "lanyards" "barrel Hitches" and other nautical terms. Done!
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