Hi Amy/Gretel Welcome to WDC. I hope that you'll find us an open and welcoming community of writers. We're all on the same journey. I couldn't help but notice that you've posted your first short story in your port which tells me you're not necessarily new to writing, only the site. I did a quick read and I'll get by and give you a review soon. You may want to take a moment and fill out the biography section. It sometimes helps readers understand the context of your writing. Welcome aboard. I wish you the very best in 2015! Ken |