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 A Happy Ending... Open in new Window. []
this ismy attempt at a romantic story, I hope it works.

Hey guys, so this is a wee story i worked on all last night and a little while this morning. Its meant to be a romantic/love story. So let me know what you think pleas. Thanks. I know ive said befour im not very good at romantics so thas why im trying to practise them. improve my wrting skills as it were. Welli hope u think its at least half decent Thanks xxx
avnt really unloaded in a few days so just undated it so its fixed. Posted my notes from the last few day including 2days, but i dont have much time cuz i got to get 2 colege so bye.
(The oupel) A cupel waked side-by-side threw a parlk. though they didnt utter a word to one another, the were justenjoying the company of the other He tookhr had, and sqused it getly, she returnedthis gesture with a smile...thesmile, his smile.
(runner) My shoes were tied, my bags were packed and minight approched. My folkes are asleep, the keys are in the lock...it's alomst too easy. (28/08/2012)
(Tic-tok) Tic-tok, tic-tock he tappd his fingers against he glass table inpasiantly, becoming more and more anoyed. Even the sound of the clock was becming a problum Tic-tok he exhaled in frustration, how long are theygoing to make him wait? (27/08/2012)
(dreaming) I kept dreaming the same dream...bu, it dosn't feel lke a dream, more like a distant memory. It's like i'm clinging to strings...looking for answeres that just arnt their. In my dreams I am dying..but in my head, I'm allready dead. (26/08/2012).
(Ali) Ali was the name she gave herself, Not one of us questioned her actions , we just sortof went along with her. That mistake was our undoing. (25/08/2012).
(The Ledge)I stood on the ledg of th 20 story building and stard down at the people and traffic below, probably maing their way to work, or heading hom ater workig the nightshift. The crisp air hit my face as i let my first leg fall. (24/08/2012)
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 The Day Edward Willis Took His Revenge Open in new Window. [E]
this is a short story i wrote for a school project about revenge


and i fixed hopfully all the spelling errors =3 (probably 0 grammer errors though, so half way their haha)
Ive never been good at writing romance storys. Ive tryed but they all somehow end up...dark or twisted. Its like the way I write I just dont let the heroin charactor be with their love intrest charactor...something ike that I guess. Maybe its because I tend not to plann out my storys befour hand and I just let my storys go astray for what my origiona goal was, either way, I suck at writing a romantic-happy-go-lucky ending...though the way I just said it their dosnt make it sound to good haha.
(Enamy) After a few seconds he pulled his head out of the sink full of warm water. He wiped his face with a towel, and stared in the mirror. His eyes were full of hate, hate for his own reflection.
(missing you) He sat the card and flowers on her front door, hoping the rain wouldn't get to them befour she did. He needed herto know what he reay felt, and how sorry he truly was.
I've added a new item to my portfolio:
 The Day Edward Willis Took His Revenge Open in new Window. [E]
this is a short story i wrote for a school project about revenge

Its a short story about revenge (fiction) i wrote it a wee whie ago for a school thing where we were to write about revenge, this was my 2nd attempt, my first story was alot diffrent but it was to long so i submitted this instead. i might upload the other story if i can find it.
(reach into the sky) I looked up into the cloudless blue sky and strech my arms out as far as i could reach, i felt the gental breez against my skin, and the warm sun beating down on my face. I was happy. Content in that moment.
Hi their, well this is my first notebook entry and i always start with a quick wee intro of my self, so il make this quick. just a quick note to say ill probably use this space for my short storys, i try and write a short cupple of lines in a note book a day so il probaby upload that in this space. Thanks for listening, ill post my (proper) first note in just a moment =)
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