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This a fragment of a story that came to me last night, and kept me awake most of the night fitting bits and pieces together.
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It's taken some time to complete the editing process, but here it is. This pretty much completes part one, thirteen chapters, approximately 32K words.

If you haven't had a chance to read the updated chapters, please do, there's a lot of new material added. I've created the chapters as new documents so you can get additional review points.

Thank you for taking the time to read my work!
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Fairly comprehensive re-write, changed to 3PL, smoothed out some inconsistencies in the story and conversations.
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Minor title change ONLY. A friend suggested that I order the stories, thanks, Greg!!
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Tea for Three

Many thanks to northernwrites for some very helpful suggestions and critical analysis. It is much appreciated.
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Final Pass edit.
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Final pass edit.
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Continuity edit. This is one of the first Allotrope stories I wrote and the stories written after this one changed some features of his diet.

In reading through all the stories, this is set in the earliest periods of Allotrope's life, before he has an appreciation of certain avian creatures and the burdens they bear.
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Major rewrite of Chapter 12. My fault completely. Wrote the whole thing in 3rd person. Oy. Just. Oy. *headdesk*

Anyway, it was an opportunity to clean up some sections that seemed to be a bit awkward and added some more detail to the end.
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Fixed that missing word! Thanks Greg!!
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A short story I wrote about 4 years ago.
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This last chapter (#9) took a bit of time to get out of my head and into the keyboard. Some family wrassling screwed up my muse for a couple of days, then had to work my way through a couple of conversations that were difficult at best.

I've had to start a character list so I can keep names straight. A couple are fairly close-sounding, and if I'm away from the keyboard too long, they run together. Still not family, yet. Sort of like calling your cousin "Hey you".
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Hard at work on Chapter 9. Lost a day due to some family issues, but back at it. Rough draft probably posted in a couple of days.
Chapter 9 of what?
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Blood of Patriots. Forgot that part, sorry!
:p thats ok. We all make mistakes.
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Pretty much the second half of chapter six is off the top of my head from this afternoon. Still feels very rough around the edges.
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