A tip I learned the other day... go to your book and find "ly" and take out as many as you can (words like quickly, slowly, etc.) Either consider removing the word or rework the sentence. In doing so, I found my sentences became more original and tailored to my writing style. Try it out! I'm happier with my writing now. I say this because I read somewhere that a lady submitted her query letter, and the agent rejected it with this comment, "Nice story, but what's unique about your sentences?" |
I wrote the first thing that came to mind and this is what came out:
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Hello fellow writers! I currently have 260 views for my novel, THE WAR QUEEN. This is a completed adult fantasy novel that I am working on getting published. It is free and downloadable on Smashwords.com. Here is the direct link: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/454038 I'm trying to gain exposures and reviews to catch the eye of literary agents! Will you help me? |