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I've added a new item to my portfolio:
 Leaving Ireland  (13+)
First chapter of a genealogy story.
I've just edited an item in my portfolio:
 Irish Beginnings  (13+)
An introduction to my family genealogy story.
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I've added a new item to my portfolio:
Legacy  (E)
A poem my father wrote before he passed. He sensed when the end was near.
I love this poem my father wrote long ago.
First item put in my portfolio! It is a little scary to put my writing out for others to see. It feels like unfinished work that I have so much to learn about.
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