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I'm not trying to make you feel bad or trying to make you feel like s***. I'm not trying to argue with you. All I am doing is trying to see if you can get where I am at? A person doesn't leave because they want to, nobody wants to leave the people they love. Sometimes it's just to see if you'd stop them and try to turn things around. The answer is always answered when the person is all packed up and leaving. Sometimes it's to see if your words really are true. If you think it's because it's something I wanna do, then I have half of my answer. Half of you scared or half of you really doesn't care. |
Just wanna do something.. Just wanna move from this couch... Just wanna do something together to make some new memories. To see your smile. To hear you laugh. If this is it then... I guess this is it. I'll enjoy every moment I get with you as long as your happy. As long as you don't forget about me. |
Just gonna continue on with the day. I'mma smile because I deserve to. I'mma love myself because I deserve to. I'mma laugh and joke because I deserve to. I'mma make converstation with other because I can. Inside I'm dying but doesn't mean I gotta die on the outside. Positive vibes need to be shared. |
When the one you love is slowly pushing you away.. for no good reason at all. Never have I ever done anything wrong. Yet they treat me like I have done everything possible to have our love in this situation. When you keep trying but they keep pulling away. I wish I could just know the honest feelings, so we can continue or I can continue. SO confused... |
I said "Bitch please." As the universe slapped me. "Is that all you got? Cause you hit like a man dressed as a fairy." The universe struck again and as I held my face I smiled and laughed. "I can take whatever you throw at me, for the devil gave me my wings and the angels gave me the power. I will conqour and I will always keep this crown." Then the universe shoved me to my knees and as I crawled. I said, "Do to me as you please. For you can not break me. See how I crawl, yet this crown still stands tall." Next the universe tried to kill me and again I smiled and laughed. "Oh! How I enjoy this all! For you are the reason I am stronger and wiser! So give it your all!" Then the universe stood back but only to let me pass. |