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I edited Obsession again for the third time. If it's possible, may any reviewers helped me with the second paragraph? The story is told in first person, where the narrator is the character in the story, but not the focal character. I'm having trouble because I'm wondering if it's okay for the narrator to describe a scene where she was not present?
I've just edited Obsession in my portfolio:
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A friend's anxiety about her mentally unstable friend.
Hello everyone! I posted a new item called Falling Down Perfect. It's an outline of a screenplay I plan on writing. Suggestions would be wonderful on improvement. Thank you!
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