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I just posted the first short story I've ever successfully attempted. It's more of an experiment I'm working on to see what I can do well and what I can learn to do better. Having made it in nearly an hour it is lacking in many areas I feel. It's without a doubt unlike anything I've ever tried to produce. Any feedback given would be appreciated. As honestly harsh as possible.

Thanks everyone!
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