Truly touching and interesting poem. It almost brought a tear to my eye! This is the third poem of yours I have read so far and I have to say you have amazing talent-especially when it comes to imagry. Thank you so much for posting your work and allowing me to read it. Very much apreciated!
-Abbie
Beautiful! Again this is an extremly insightful and exciting poem! I cannot tell you how much I enjoyed reading this piece! It was so touching, the way you used magnificent words to illustrate the uncontrollable nature of love and destiny. Beautiful!
-Abbie
Beautiful! Again this is an extremly insightful and exciting poem! I cannot tell you how much I enjoyed reading this piece! It was so touching, the way you used magnificent words to illustrate the uncontrollable nature of love and destiny. Beautiful!
-Abbie
I love the imagry this piece created-the journey and struggles of youth, they way they form and break bonds, and of course the never ending search for something more. Amazing and insightful job! Well done, keep writing.
-Abbie
This is a truly beautiful poem! I can really relate to the topic and I love how you have put your emotions into the poem, that was very brave. You have done an amazing job! The last stanza was particularly clever, but the entire thing was inspired! The poem flows really well and is a pleasure to read :)
Well done
-Abbie
I love this poem!! It has a great flow to it and is a lot of fun to read. You chose your words very well and wrote very effectivly!
I think the rhyme is very clever and helps to keep the poem flowing well :)
I thought the boldness of the bottom line was very appropriate and deffinatly made it pop :)
Amazing work
-Abbie
I love the way this poem flows, it makes it touching and yet still a lot of fun to read. It has some clever rhymes and you used a great choice of words :)
Over all I loved it and thought it was beautifully written.
Great job :)
-Abbie
Beautiful poem! I agree that men shouldn't be denied their children just because they're men. Fathers deserve the same rights as mothers. I wish you a lot of luck in trying to get your daughter back, she would be very lucky to have you. -Abbie
This is an awsome story!
It hold so much emotion and feeling, but at the same time holds a tough and masculin quality.
I loved your choice of words and phrases used to highlight certain phrases to show emotions, very eleverly written.
I enjoyed the last paragraph in particular, and the rhyme in the last line. It is a lovely ending to a fantastic piece of writing.
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