I really enjoyed this! Your use of descriptors is astounding; I could see and feel everything that the man and the woman saw and felt, down to their final kiss. While it invoked sadness in me, it also filled me with a bit of joy because of how peaceful the man and woman were taking the end of the world. It brought joy to my heart, and, again, I truly enjoyed this.
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