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Hi there!
I must say, I love the title of your poem! Absolutely love it, because it says exactly what the poem is about - winter time , but it isn't something boring like just 'Winter'. I always have difficulty in deciding a title for your poem, this one is wonderful though, so simple and yet so elegant!
OK, so onwards with the poem. I like Shakespearean sonnets, though I have never written one (I guess might now, after reading this). I find them charming, which is why I think your title does justice to it. Takes me back to the Elizebethan era.
I love the writing, the rhyme is awesome, the flow is beautiful, I read your poem twice, I enjoyed it so much! The theme is great, I love the symbolism. Our life keep changing just like the seasons, which,I think, is what you have tried to say with this piece.
You talk about this one person, who lights up a fire inside you, but when they are gone you feel cold and alone. However in the end, instead of talking about that person coming back to you, you wish that you find 'someone' to give you that feeling of warmth ( or spring) again! I love that so much! It means that people come and people go, it doesn't have to be the same person, but you will always long for someone to be there for you. That someone can be anyone, relations are transitory, just like everything else, and therefore, you don't expect the same person to come back. It remind me of the movie 500 days of Summer, I don't know if you have seen it or not, so no spoilers
The couplet at the end is, as is obvious by now, my favorite part of the poem. You have fulfilled the true criterion of a sonnet! 3 beautiful quatrains followed by a couplet that stays in the reader's mind long after they have finished reading poem. And the perfect 10 syllable count of the lines!
Wonderful job!!
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