This poem is pretty good overall. I would just search the thesaurus for stronger words. But you did a very good job overall! I enjoyed reading it!
Morgan
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This is a beautiful poem. I can relate to everything that you said. You have a real talent for poetry and I'm very happy I found this poem because it was gorgeous.
Suggestions:
I have no suggestions. The poem is perfect as is. :)
Go check out my portfolio. I have some poems!
Good Job!
Keep on Writing,
Morgan Rodgers
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