I loved this poem. I used to live in the center of tornado allley and this pretty much accurately described how it felt sometimes. Kudos and a job well done. I can't really say anything you need to improve on. One of the best professors I ever had said "A great writer can't be made, son. You have to keep writing and writing and writing and then one day the light will break."
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