wow. thats all i can say is wow. i've read many good things on this site but that was amazing. when kelly entered the healing room i had a feeling that something bad would happen. the introduction kind of suported that event. i suppose that what you are trying to get at is that the orphans or "the damned" are kind of..posesed by this evil spirit i'm guessing was once defeated by High King Loewi. i look forward to reading the rest of your collection.
wow. you had me on my toes the whole time. the way you told about the house was completely amazing. you also made it so i felt like i knew the characters. when becky and johnny didn't retern i almost felt bad for them. amazing story. you should make a sequel where becky and johnny come back from the dead and haunt kevin.
I think this is a great poem. Definatly beter than anything i could ever write. One thing though. In the begining you don't get the feeling that this man is a firefighter, you think he is a person who has been thrown into a volcano and is suffering from great burns.
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