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Rated: E | (5.0)
I LOVE this poem. I love it because it absolutely speaks to me in my current situation. I love how you used such beautiful words and imagery.

Until today I felt I could reach for the stars,
But I’d surely have one by now.- this was the part of your poem that grabbed my heart the most. So many people can relate to this, I believe. Oh i can't wait to see more of your work.

I dont think I see any grammatical errors, but that is one things as a writer that I need to work on. This piece is going straight to my favorites folder. very well done- Shelley


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