Great piece of writing.The flow is very good,very natural.The story is amazingly entertaining and a lot of tender feelings there.Big concern for details which makes the reader really involved.Thank you for sharing.
Which God is right? Surely the one who loves peace and condemns war.There is only one God and he has always preach peace and love. The rest are man made to take them to power through war and destruction.Very nice poem.Full of heartfelt emotions.Good rhyme, excellent choice of words. thank you for sharing.Keep writing.
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