Wow. I love this piece. Here's a quote I'd like to share with you: "" Where The Road Does Not Lead Us, Lies A Place We Realize, At The Least, That Truly Exists! This Place Is Called "Peace!" So Don't Always Take The Path Of Which Is Paved, Take A Path Of Which Must Be Made. And Peace You Will Find! - Juan S. Quitugua ""
this was a good read. i enjoyed it. the way it was written described how it really happens, well based on my minimal experiences. although i was never really afraid of dogs, i was more afraid of getting bit. so i avoided being near them. but all in all. i think you did a pretty good job on this. keep up the good work.
i was able to actually visualize a scene like this. someone asking me to look inside the door, then im being drawn to it with the verses being said. it drives the temptation to really do it. this piece really moved me. keep up the great work. im now inspired to continue writing myself. it was a good read, im glad i stumbled upon this.
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